for the pumpkin duke9/21/2019 c5 Anonymous
Please please please please continue the story i like it so far and i love a good story.
Please please please please continue the story i like it so far and i love a good story.
9/2/2019 c5 
69John2851
More please this is so, so, so, so good!. I'm just dying to see the reunited Victor and Emily and see them get married for good this time plus, having a job at being scary when Halloween rolls in as they become The Corpse Bride and Groom. Please continue buddy and make more chapters.
69John2851More please this is so, so, so, so good!. I'm just dying to see the reunited Victor and Emily and see them get married for good this time plus, having a job at being scary when Halloween rolls in as they become The Corpse Bride and Groom. Please continue buddy and make more chapters.
11/13/2018 c5 Person
This was a nice chapter. The kids must be so cute! (Yeah, figured out the story combination part after going back hehe.)
This was a nice chapter. The kids must be so cute! (Yeah, figured out the story combination part after going back hehe.)
11/13/2018 c1 Person
This seems like a combination of two existing fics (yeah I'm pretty sure of it), but do I care? Oh nah! A delightful story so far. Keep up the good work!
This seems like a combination of two existing fics (yeah I'm pretty sure of it), but do I care? Oh nah! A delightful story so far. Keep up the good work!
3/1/2018 c3 134moviefan-92
This is turning out well. The interacting between the characters is good. Might I make a suggestion though. Make sure to keep dialogue separated to avoid confusion. Basically, every time someone starts and stops talking should be on a different line.
134moviefan-92This is turning out well. The interacting between the characters is good. Might I make a suggestion though. Make sure to keep dialogue separated to avoid confusion. Basically, every time someone starts and stops talking should be on a different line.
2/28/2018 c1 moviefan-92
This was a good intro. It covered the recap nicely without telling too much of the plot of the movie, giving us all the basics. It also went into Victor's mind. I like getting into the mind's of the characters, so that was good. It'll be interesting to see how you have him react to Jack.
This was a good intro. It covered the recap nicely without telling too much of the plot of the movie, giving us all the basics. It also went into Victor's mind. I like getting into the mind's of the characters, so that was good. It'll be interesting to see how you have him react to Jack.