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3/4/2018 c1 guest
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3/3/2018 c1 Guest
I agree that the ending is weak, but it feels like it's trying to lead into another chapter. I loved this! The tone changes were perfect, and Natsu acted so much like he did in Mashima's Twitter sketches.

Lucy, don't make Natsu put his clothes back on. A body like that needs to be admired. Dem abs
3/3/2018 c1 yuujideservestheworld
Yes make another part! ️
3/3/2018 c1 11KarinStalker24
This story is so funny! YES! Put a second part with a chaotic wedding for Lucy... Oh! And don't forget to write how they announced the thing to the guild, it should be pretty hilarious to see this.
3/3/2018 c1 4MorriganFae
OMG, this was funny, sweet, sexy and at the beginning?! I do sensed and felt Lucy’s loneliness and isolation from the group. You explained it so well and I felt her sadness that everyone else was growing up, getting married, having kids.

My two favourite parts at the end was Natsu just stripping in front of her (ties so well into canon Natsu with what Hiro Mashima has posted on Twitter and I LOVED it!)

Then him saying “I’ve read your porn books.”

DYING!

Then him telling Lucy if she moans like that again, they’re making a baby that night and getting married tomorrow?

Holy mother of Acorns! I basically fell over like a tree!

So. Hot. So. Sexy.

I thought it was great, but since definitely won’t discourage you if you want to expand it and give us more! X
3/1/2018 c1 duskbird
Oh poor Lucy... ok, I couldn't keep the giggle bug away :D
Can't imagine Natsu proposing or confessing like a romance novel, so all action and no words sounds like him. Committed in Natsu's own way, but oh the devil in him LOL
Wonder how many of their friends will face palm themselves when they find out. Or a betting pool?
I'd definitely be up to find out what happens next (_-)
3/1/2018 c1 nix.flos
it is fantastic! and yes please, another part would be lovely!
3/1/2018 c1 1aislyn98
Love it! You should definitely continue this! I’d love to see where you take it.
3/1/2018 c1 3RosesMcKellar
Yep that is Natsu, he forgot to tell Lucy. I loved this.
3/1/2018 c1 1the-wayward-painter
I would love a version of this from Natsu's side!
3/1/2018 c1 3AwkwardToffee
Oh wow! Natsu's ways make sense to me, knowing him. Poor Lucy she didn't see it coming. This needs to be continued! :))
3/1/2018 c1 4FlameDragonHime
I can totally understand Lucy's point of view.
3/1/2018 c1 krzyktty101
Wonderful story!
3/1/2018 c1 hrsf
I like your story wery much, think its so sweet ) If you adding another part, it could be fun if Lucy told the guild, that she didnt know she was dating Natsu. Sorry for my bad english. )
3/1/2018 c1 Lunar13
The ending could use some sprucing. It's abrupt and an extension could round it out. All in all, like the story!
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