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2/24/2021 c5 aiyannaliszkap
i know im so so so late but i cant help but praise you. this is so good. the characterizations is amazing and i know the storyline will be remarkable based on the previous chapters. im glad you didnt end it in a mean cliffhanger so i can sleep. thank you for this story and i really hope you will continue this. this is truly a masterpiece. kudos.
2/19/2021 c5 10YukiMC
OMG! Sorry it took me so long to review, this is great! After I graduated, I've been working two jobs and have been busy like crazy. I'm happy I had some time today to catch up on some fics like this one! I absolutely love how you characterized Natsu and Lucy in this fic, I can almost see them and their interactions clearly due to your excellent writing, their chemistry is piping hot! Literally! I thought it was cute how he was caring for her and also Natsu losing focus of anyone else but Lucy. Mira's teasing was the cherry on top, she knows what's up, ahah! I'm really excited to see Natsu and Lucy's romance develop and their intimacy brew hotter! Girl, you never disappoint! 3

Your admirer,
YukiMC
1/31/2021 c5 Breathlessmoments
God I love this please update soon
12/31/2020 c5 2shrinemaiden05
Loving this story and loo forward to reading more.
12/29/2020 c1 Guest
I’ve only read the first chapter but I’m hooked! I love this version of Lucy and Aquarius as the evil stepmother somehow fits? In early FT Aquarius seemed to resent Lucy a lot so this works. I’m loving it so far. Thank you for your hard work and Merry Christmas/Happy New Year!
12/18/2020 c5 Guest
Okay! It's been a while since I've read lol, but lemme preface by saying that I remembered the previous chapters.

Where do I begin, I can see this is a natsu chivalry type story. Would you believe me it I told you that I don't know the full Cinderella story? Well I don't

But I really enjoyed this side of natsu, without hin seeming arrogantly goofy... if you catch my drift. I enjoyed the angelic description of Lucy had natsu's infatuation. Mira fit in well too, pretty accurate to me

This is impressive stuff! I'm always lost for words when I read your work! I'm sorry about the late review also, it wasn't my intention to be this late!
12/18/2020 c5 32RavenStyx
Sorry it took me a little while. Life has been INSANE
Anyway. This was a nice way to spend my morning. My favourite, of course, was Mira, with her cut-down-entire-battlefields with her glower and her unintimidated approach to rectifying the prince’s poor behaviour. A very surprising close second was Wendy. I relished how scandalized she was by Natsu telling her to call him by his first name. (I also have this thing where I think her magic should be WAY more sought after because she’s a healer, damnit, and I think you touched on that nicely.)
K bb. This was a great chapter and I loved to read it. Take extra good care of yourself
Ily bye
12/13/2020 c5 JAKEDSNAKE
I finally read it! Damn i wish i had done it sooner this is amazing! Then again i expect nothing less from you. This had me smiling from ear to ear throughout the story. The dry wit humour, Mira's "venom" as you call it for the barb. A truly rib tickling combination. Also lets take a moment to say DAMN YOU MIRA! But she made up for it in the ending so maybe we let it slide this time. Also since i havent read this story in so long i forgot that the spoke some old english, which worked in my favour because i kept cracking up sometimes for no reason. The squeal moment when Natsu was just about to kiss Lucy was so awesome...then Mira was like nope. *poof* Pop. Access denied. Sigh to think animated characters can get me this worked up. Still love FT though. I cant wait to see where Natsu takes her! Truly amazing chapter!
12/8/2020 c5 1Leomae2.0
Brand new to this story but I am absolutely loving it! Satyrykal was right, this story is awesome! I hope you update again soon! Only thing I will say is that I preferred the past tense and when it switched in chapter 2 I was hoping it would stay. Sorry I’m old school and took WAY to many English classes that always stressed that stories should be in past tense because the narrator is talking about events that have already happened. For instance you don’t say “I take the car and drive to town.” You say “I took the car and drove to town.” That’s just me though. With all these FF writers out there breaking the rules I’ve learned to just switch it in my brain lol. Otherwise though I’m in love! Send Sat Happy Birthday wishes for me! Also, could you get onto her about actually updating The Edge. It’s been ages! Anyway, ttyl! Love the story and look forward to more soon! Hopefully lol.
12/8/2020 c5 SheWhoLeavesCrappyReviews
This is great! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
12/7/2020 c5 Guest
I did not expect to like this as much as I do now! I am so excited for the rest of this story!
12/6/2020 c5 1Wallace11
so far its a really sweet story, I can't wait to read more.
12/5/2020 c5 RedX
I am so happy I stumbled across this story. I’m loving it! You have such a great writing style. I devoured the first five chapters and can’t wait for more. Keep up the good work!
12/1/2020 c1 IndigoArcher89
Love the new chapters!
12/1/2020 c5 Larissa
Squeeee! You're back! I am so excited that this story is being continued!
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