for Reincarnations3/18/2024 c1 
3DIAVOLO the boi
i ca understand
SPSM Naruto is one of the best designs and it's sad it's not in Borutothat's why i am never watching it)
3DIAVOLO the boii ca understand
SPSM Naruto is one of the best designs and it's sad it's not in Borutothat's why i am never watching it)
3/15/2024 c1 UzumakiHinata
"Power comes out of a need not a desire"
A quote From dbz I'd like you to use if you willer ever revisit this story cuz making Naruto op from the start is very boring
"Power comes out of a need not a desire"
A quote From dbz I'd like you to use if you willer ever revisit this story cuz making Naruto op from the start is very boring
12/26/2020 c1 ayshi2016
Is naruto going to be in a team with hinata and shino ? If so, i really like to see it.
Is naruto going to be in a team with hinata and shino ? If so, i really like to see it.
12/15/2019 c1 Guest
Well thanks for the warning at least.
I plan to stay far away now cause fuck that shit I'm out.
Well thanks for the warning at least.
I plan to stay far away now cause fuck that shit I'm out.
7/21/2018 c3 DirePanda072
This was great and I really hope you continue it! This fic has a lot of potential and I'd hate to see it go down the drain
This was great and I really hope you continue it! This fic has a lot of potential and I'd hate to see it go down the drain
5/27/2018 c3 9NarHina
It's alright, though it is bugging me that Tenzo wasn't taken away by the third until around 8 years after nine tails. And Yugao would be 10 right after the attack, while she would still be in Anbu does since she was recruited at a young age, I feel the big sister role would have been a better start point, you then could have add Yagao adopt Naruto officially after she got older and have try and get him to call her Kaa-san. Juts kind of bugs you when you don't have any idea of there age.
Also the sun mark for the sage is white, not brown.
Besides those canon parts being different it was pretty good though it does feel everything is going Naruto's way. But his interactions with Hinata and other character make up for it.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
9NarHinaIt's alright, though it is bugging me that Tenzo wasn't taken away by the third until around 8 years after nine tails. And Yugao would be 10 right after the attack, while she would still be in Anbu does since she was recruited at a young age, I feel the big sister role would have been a better start point, you then could have add Yagao adopt Naruto officially after she got older and have try and get him to call her Kaa-san. Juts kind of bugs you when you don't have any idea of there age.
Also the sun mark for the sage is white, not brown.
Besides those canon parts being different it was pretty good though it does feel everything is going Naruto's way. But his interactions with Hinata and other character make up for it.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
4/8/2018 c1 2TheRedeemer1995
This is pretty good! I'm looking forward to more. Hope to see you return the favor for my works!
2TheRedeemer1995This is pretty good! I'm looking forward to more. Hope to see you return the favor for my works!
4/2/2018 c3 Tainted Uchiha
Just wanted to throw out a quick review to tell you how well you are doing so far.
I have read a lot of Naruto fanfiction throughout the years and can honestly say that you are easily in the top 2% of writers I have read.
The fanfic has a very promising start. A nice well thought out plot. Something a little different to other stories on the site and I like that it will be a strong/Godlike Naruto fiction. They are very enjoyable but often are hard to write and therefore are poorly presented and poorly recieved.
I think you have obvious skill as a writer. You do not suffer from the same pitfall many strong writers on here do and try to overcomplecate your story. The pace seems good and the plot seems strong.
Not sure what your idea in terms of progression in time span are for the near future of the fic. I think I would like to see some form of progression in terms of training/ timeskip in the next few chapters simply for the pace of the story and to enable you to write some much more exciting sequences and this may appeal to more casual readers.
I am very interested to see where you go from here. Look forward to more from you.
Just wanted to throw out a quick review to tell you how well you are doing so far.
I have read a lot of Naruto fanfiction throughout the years and can honestly say that you are easily in the top 2% of writers I have read.
The fanfic has a very promising start. A nice well thought out plot. Something a little different to other stories on the site and I like that it will be a strong/Godlike Naruto fiction. They are very enjoyable but often are hard to write and therefore are poorly presented and poorly recieved.
I think you have obvious skill as a writer. You do not suffer from the same pitfall many strong writers on here do and try to overcomplecate your story. The pace seems good and the plot seems strong.
Not sure what your idea in terms of progression in time span are for the near future of the fic. I think I would like to see some form of progression in terms of training/ timeskip in the next few chapters simply for the pace of the story and to enable you to write some much more exciting sequences and this may appeal to more casual readers.
I am very interested to see where you go from here. Look forward to more from you.