for A Sith's Second Chance5/8 c10 
1Viperion
Impressive writing. Loved the story in it's completion.
Nice conclusion. Thanks for sharing
1ViperionImpressive writing. Loved the story in it's completion.
Nice conclusion. Thanks for sharing
4/6 c1 Blue-Happens
this seems like a worse written, more monotonous version of the 'vader: hero of naboo' story tbh. idk this is still a good read, but it has some pretty clear issues
this seems like a worse written, more monotonous version of the 'vader: hero of naboo' story tbh. idk this is still a good read, but it has some pretty clear issues
3/31 c10 17WwEpsilonwW
Vader was a slave.
A slave to the creation of a peaceful world.
Even so, he took on that burden willingly.
What a beautiful story.
Well done, Mr. Author.
17WwEpsilonwWVader was a slave.
A slave to the creation of a peaceful world.
Even so, he took on that burden willingly.
What a beautiful story.
Well done, Mr. Author.
3/9 c10 Dante1603
Well it was interesting, i kinda enjoyed, but jedi order bashing looks like sooo stupid, you already have reasons to bash them why you ever create jedi-сonsular issues. But along this and honey trap jedis(really cringe thing, like honey trap kunoichi in naruto) and a little bit fanon stuff, it was fun, shame that only badass epic scene is when Vader make every force users in galaxy shit their pants in his first arrive
Well it was interesting, i kinda enjoyed, but jedi order bashing looks like sooo stupid, you already have reasons to bash them why you ever create jedi-сonsular issues. But along this and honey trap jedis(really cringe thing, like honey trap kunoichi in naruto) and a little bit fanon stuff, it was fun, shame that only badass epic scene is when Vader make every force users in galaxy shit their pants in his first arrive
2/27 c1 Guest
If he is so afraid of ruining the timeline, then why doesn’t he think about the fact that it was those actions that he committed that led him to “rebirth”? What if he changes something, he will simply dissolve because the event did not happen x
If he is so afraid of ruining the timeline, then why doesn’t he think about the fact that it was those actions that he committed that led him to “rebirth”? What if he changes something, he will simply dissolve because the event did not happen x
1/25 c10 TW
Fantastic story
Fantastic story
11/8/2024 c10 Kosi
Wonderful fuc
Wonderful fuc
11/8/2024 c7 Kosi
Dont mind kenobi dieing , cool chap
Dont mind kenobi dieing , cool chap
11/8/2024 c5 Kosi
Ya not wrong about the jedi concerning anakin
Ya not wrong about the jedi concerning anakin
11/8/2024 c3 Kosi
Lovely fight scene
Lovely fight scene
11/8/2024 c1 Kosi
Excellent 1st chap
Excellent 1st chap
10/27/2024 c5 AnthonyR89
so, ill just point out one glaring problem with Kahleesh generals: they have absolutely no experience in space warfare, or fighting beyond their own own gravity well. Grievous doing well can be dismissed as a fluke, or a genius. having them all be successful is just completely unrealistic.
so, ill just point out one glaring problem with Kahleesh generals: they have absolutely no experience in space warfare, or fighting beyond their own own gravity well. Grievous doing well can be dismissed as a fluke, or a genius. having them all be successful is just completely unrealistic.