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10/19/2020 c21 SetoRJK-Kaiba
I’m so curious to know what happens next. It’s interesting and I hope are well. I know you mostly don’t care anymore, but hopefully I hope you can fix this. Stay safe and well.
1/2/2020 c21 Guest
Do you really think that Sarada will accept what Naruto wrote in latter? No she will not after returning she will keep try to take Naruto away from Hinata, I don't like Boruto Series but what I saw I know that Sarada is not a girl to give up something, her love will turn obsession and It will be dangerous. Maybe I made a sequel of this story and make the story progresses and make things what I wrote their. I will start the story with a evil smile from Sarada and first word that will come from her mouth will be '' Naruto you really thought that I will give up like that? No you been seen my love before Naruto and from now you will see my obsession, you are just mine and will take you as mine, even if I have to do anything.
7/2/2019 c3 KodeMisuke-Sama
Roses are red,
Thorns are prickly,
Holy Fuck,
That escalated quickly.
5/5/2019 c21 N.S
Yeah it has a sad ending but I have to admit it feels right and more realistic. Great story! Looking forward to your other NaruSara stories/oneshots
3/4/2019 c21 2cleansingcream18
The ending feels incredibly rushed and it’s too bad you hadn’t done any scene which involves Sarada’s parents knowing about what their best friend/hokage did with their minor daughter. It would’ve been a pivotal scene and i bet a lot of the readers would have wanted that scene to be happened. It had a promising story with the idea of Sarada having daddy issue and started to cling to Naruto and having certain kind of attraction to him. But, what’s ending is ending and any author has their right to do whatever they want to their fanfiction.
2/25/2019 c21 Guest
He sure works fast after taking the v card and leaving with it...
2/24/2019 c3 dubstep96
HE HAS NOW REACHED R KELLY STATUS!
2/24/2019 c1 dubstep96
Damn Naruto is as smooth as XD
12/20/2018 c21 Kurosaki The Hero
SO SAD! Must have an alternate ending where she joins hinata as a wife
12/4/2018 c21 Count of Nossex
gr8 stuff, could have left the end open though, so sad...
11/7/2018 c21 Arfah Indo
Ohoo!? ... Okey next wahahaa
10/27/2018 c21 Guest
good story, underwhelming ending.
10/17/2018 c21 1NHarem Foreva
Wait that’s the ending? FUUUUCCCKKKKKKKKKK
10/14/2018 c21 Guest
what the hell was this! why did you end it so abruptly?
10/16/2018 c21 7Ramen-For-Life
love your feedback! you guys are amazing. i am sorry the ending wasn't the greatest for some of you... hmm maybe don't think of it as an end... and i will try and get a sequel or add-on chapters when i am ready.
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