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10/16/2018 c2 ArseseiX8
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Jason, steady," said Carl's voice in his ear. "Sit back, slipstream him, save your tyres."

The angry mob wanted Jesus killed for blasphemy. O.O
10/16/2018 c5 JaylorX71
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
He didn't believe it for a moment. That thing looked hostile. He raised the bracelet to his mouth to report - this was too important to worry about possible comms insecurity - and discovered that the light sequence had gone from 'insecure' to 'unavailable'.

Stop writing. O.o
10/16/2018 c5 Buffa.40
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"We should do this more often," Princess said.

My mother tasted the soup and added a little more salt. ;)
10/15/2018 c4 TOleTatnaX75
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Fast forward something over thirty years and I'm having a discussion in a fanfic forum about "Rashomon storytelling", which involves a story whose narrator(s) have forgotten or misinterpreted things, so the story they tell isn't quite what happened. And I realised that my novelisations were rather like this, except that I was the one who'd got things wrong rather than the characters. Plus, I was a young teen when I wrote these things. No internet for research, and the Mary Sue self-insert from hell. I could do better now. So I decided I'd rewrite my thirty year old novelisation - but without referring back to the episode.

What the woman wants, God wants!. :)
10/15/2018 c5 Nejrsei.89
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Dammit, he shouldn't need to tell me that. Jason blinked hard, refocusing. Carl was right. He was off the racing line and too close. Especially following a driver with a rep for drifting. Regardless of whether he'd made the right call, losing the race now would be bad and crashing even worse. He was always being told he needed to be better at compartmentalising. He was going to do it, right now. Nine laps of perfect driving.

He was wearing black trousers and a beautiful white shirt. :P
10/15/2018 c5 BranutotoII44
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"I need you all back here now," said Anderson's voice through his bracelet.

When the term "crusade" is used to refer to a noble quest, the groups who suffered from the original medieval crusades are not happy. ;)
10/15/2018 c5 SSuffy 5
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
"Jason!"

The plot was unbelievable. :P
10/14/2018 c3 TaCeTanseixXx27
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Round the sharp external corner in the cliff, and he was in luck. Two cars were parked at the wide point, with a space between them that no standard driving technique could slot a car into. He wasn't sure he could pull it off, but he was out of other options. Jason lined it up and threw the G-2 into a sliding, skidding spin which left it pointing back down the road, a deserted car front and back, looking as if it had been there all day. Now all he needed was to leave it equally deserted and in civilian mode. Not the G-2 they'd been chasing, nice cold engine even if they stopped to check.

Bad. :P
10/14/2018 c3 Hinisinas 46
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
"Going round the outside? Give him plenty of room. He'll drift out. Caused a few accidents, that one." Carl didn't sound impressed. Jason wasn't, either. Driving a racecar was dangerous enough without your fellow competitors making it worse.

Much of the modern resistance to chastity comes from men's belief that they "own" their bodies
10/14/2018 c5 Shia 9
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
A pause, as below him on the track the two leading cars neatly avoided a couple of backmarkers. A rather longer pause than the manoeuvre demanded.

this is gold...
10/14/2018 c3 MaLigt 87
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
One chance: a layby half a mile ahead. There were several serious rock climbs on the cliffs below, and ISO was home to a large number of fit, athletic young agents. On a sunny Saturday afternoon he might just get lucky. He had absolutely no margin for error, though. He might be out of sight of his pursuers for as much as ten seconds, but it would probably be less.

this is gold...
10/14/2018 c2 Narha84
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
"How many -" Mark stopped, swallowed the curse, fishing in his pocket for the entirely non-functional cellphone he carried for show. "Hi, Chief. What can I do for you?"

What is that?
10/13/2018 c5 Madisadisa-34
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Act, not react. But he honestly had no idea what he should do. He couldn't call for help and he was about to lose the transmuted version of the G-2 to a Spectran goon squad. Refusing to pull out of a race was going to be trivial when compared to this.

Are u serious?!
10/13/2018 c3 Nejrsei.89
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Dammit, he shouldn't need to tell me that. Jason blinked hard, refocusing. Carl was right. He was off the racing line and too close. Especially following a driver with a rep for drifting. Regardless of whether he'd made the right call, losing the race now would be bad and crashing even worse. He was always being told he needed to be better at compartmentalising. He was going to do it, right now. Nine laps of perfect driving.

I'm too curious
10/13/2018 c2 Sadisasukadison 29
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Something a bit different. If you're looking for canon accuracy, you're probably in the wrong place :)

Are u serious?!
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