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9/24/2020 c1 Chryseum
He has a knife in his hand, he just killed the criminal and then HE RUNS AT THE POLICE OFFICER WAVING HIS HANDS! Wtf is this moron, I don't think even the excuse of being in such a devastating situation makes up for how stupid this guy is...
11/12/2018 c2 ALEX99999
A question. ¿Do you plan to continue eto ?. Please notify us.
9/26/2018 c2 Carol542
Love it
9/3/2018 c2 5all about party and crazy
Much better. I see that you took my advice with a Chinese Name, thank you for accepting my input.

Firstly, this is good. Secondly, since it is a dragon-beast, does the Red-eyes Black Dragon give him fire ability as a basic? Remember also that you'll have to think up what other abilities he'd gain in the future after absorbing the rings from the Monsters he kills.

Overall, I like it. Waiting for future updates dood.
6/23/2018 c2 XXX Chaos Breaker XXX
Grand moth would fit a lot better for the family background you gave the main character it also stonger then blue and red eyes dragons, plus it look weak in the beginning so it fit the bloodline of the family. it also don’t really make sense for one of the strongest Beast spirits in the world to be born into a trash family with insect spirits it like a small cat giving birth to a giant bird, bloodlines matters in the world
The last thing I want to say is don’t give your main character random over power things that come from no where like those scroll he was born with? If he had training from his last life or was given then in his new life sounds a lot better at the very least.
6/5/2018 c1 nuel95
waiting...
3/30/2018 c2 1YeTianshi
The blonde bastard was a bit delusional xD It's impossible to not have spirit energy as long as you have a good spirit essence.
Can you imagine the Blue Tyrant Lightning Dragon with no spirit energy? Impossible.

Still that's a weird deviated spirit. It's not a tool spirit (because it's alive), and it's not a beast spirit (technically, because it doesn't boost his body or become part of him.) It's more like Yu Xiaogang's deviated spirit Luo San Pao.

I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll do with this character, so far it doesn't seem like he'll become very strong, mainly because his Dragon might become OP, but him as a person will have no battle power. Eh, maybe you'll give him fusion or something?

Red Eyes Black Dragon though, nice.
Btw, since Red Eyes is going to keep getting stronger when Chu Feng add's more spirit rings and becomes stronger, here is a little idea;
Red Eyes Black Dragon-Red Eyes Black Flare Dragon-Red Eyes Darkness Dragon-Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon-Red Eyes Flare Metal Dragon
They're all a form of Red Eyes in Yugioh, and they're all pretty epic. Great chapter, I hope to see more :D
3/26/2018 c2 tsukiyomi83
Interesting rewrite. Update soon.
3/26/2018 c1 tsukiyomi83
The way he died in the other story would have been better. Thank for the rewrite.
3/9/2018 c2 Racol09
Thanks for the Great Chapter. I hope this series continue
3/8/2018 c2 IfritLeviathan
Enjoyed hope you continue

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