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4/4/2020 c30 Guest
This is a good story I like it a lot! All I wanted to note, grammarwise, is that the Japanese word 'ne' means 'right'. For example: "Kakashi will cooperate or else. Ne, Kakashi-sensei?" In English, that sentence would translate to "Kakashi will cooperate or else. Right, Kakashi-sensei?" Just wanted to let you know! Also, I hope Sakura' s non-canon relationship works out! You're doing great!
6/28/2019 c29 Earthly Entity
What's the official pairing?
5/6/2019 c28 Earthly Entity
More of a sakura x Sasuke, is it possible to find another pairing for Naruto?
2/24/2019 c28 2dbrame91
Decent story. Stretch the chapters a bit longer, and watch the grammar (know which is which with to [mose common], too [also or expressing quantity like too cute], two [the number] or they're [they are], their [possessive for more than one person], and there [location]).
12/25/2018 c1 Ryan Gabriel
Good
11/4/2018 c27 nappatheloveabl
I just blasted through chapter 1-27 and I can say that i hate you for making such a good story and not already having more out, damn thing just pulls at your heartstrings.
10/9/2018 c1 Linkskingsolomon
What's the pairing
9/13/2018 c1 6rosyhatake
LordofTerror I understand where you are coming from. This story is very much a weak naruto. The story does go into why naruto is so weak, why akumi is so hung up on keeping him close etc. He isn't weak because he doesn't try. hes weak because he was physically incapable of being strong. he recovered but at the same time not as strong as he could have been
6/28/2018 c1 Guest
If you want to be a good author then actually have balance which you did slightly in the beginning, but progressively it got worse and worse. You introduced a OP with little regard for that crucial aspect that is needed to make a great story. Pairing not really need to be said since that is something that is more balanced than the rest of the story(although I do not like it but that is more personal preference than anything else which is not related).
6/28/2018 c26 LordofTerror
I really wanted to give this story the benefit of the doubt but honestly with how useless Naruto is and making his O.C sister this perfect at everything making Naruto look even worse just killed it for me. why make your Naruto like kishimoto did? when you can change it and make him better then canon but non OP
6/8/2018 c1 LordofTerror
you make his sister this bad ass and make Naruto look useless with only fuinjutsu kind of off putting
6/3/2018 c1 3Turtlesarecoolswag
Immediate like after I read suicidal kiba lol
4/9/2018 c23 Kittyfan17
I Ove your story... i hope you update soon.
4/7/2018 c23 enteleixaduke
Update soon please
4/5/2018 c23 6rosyhatake
sorry I've been gone, I moved and then I had a 12 hour shift job that I worked everyday, I barely had time to sleep but I quit that job and have a new one. I put in like 50 hours in work a week. also I posted all my written chapters on here all at once because I wanted you guys to have the whole book. I will go back to my regular schedule of posting almost every week soon
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