
7/9/2023 c5 Guest
Do a Yotube one!
Do a Yotube one!
4/8/2021 c5 sOkEeFe RuLeS sOpHiTz DrOoLs
CONTINUE WRITING RIGHT nOw Or YoU wIlL dIe! Also have them react to...*drumroll* sunburns! LOL. they go to the beachget sunburns . ouch. painful but would be so good. LOL
CONTINUE WRITING RIGHT nOw Or YoU wIlL dIe! Also have them react to...*drumroll* sunburns! LOL. they go to the beachget sunburns . ouch. painful but would be so good. LOL
1/6/2019 c2 Lorelei
Hi! I really liked this one... great idea doing Legos!
Hi! I really liked this one... great idea doing Legos!
10/23/2018 c5 Guest
I LOVE THIS! can't wait for flashback AWESOME! I really hope you include strange things we have, and not just everyday life stuff... *constructive criticism
I LOVE THIS! can't wait for flashback AWESOME! I really hope you include strange things we have, and not just everyday life stuff... *constructive criticism
5/1/2018 c1 catspats31
Despite the okay writing quality that this story has so far, I'll give you a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Please use dialogue similar to: "Meh," Fitz said. Remove all of the chat/script format from your story. Add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavor.
Despite the okay writing quality that this story has so far, I'll give you a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Please use dialogue similar to: "Meh," Fitz said. Remove all of the chat/script format from your story. Add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavor.
4/20/2018 c5 Linh Song
Haha this is so cool! I love this react so much. You should check out my new react too! They react to books! Anyway this is amazing and I love it!
Haha this is so cool! I love this react so much. You should check out my new react too! They react to books! Anyway this is amazing and I love it!
3/11/2018 c2 Mia
YES! Mythbusters is my favorite show of all time. I have most of the Series of Unfortunate Events books too.
YES! Mythbusters is my favorite show of all time. I have most of the Series of Unfortunate Events books too.
3/9/2018 c1 Mia
YES! I am not the only person who watches white rabbit project! And series of unfortunate events!
YES! I am not the only person who watches white rabbit project! And series of unfortunate events!