
4/4/2019 c7
1Azarath Cat
Yay! This story's back! I really like the way you write Rachel, and I'm so glad to see this adventure continue!

Yay! This story's back! I really like the way you write Rachel, and I'm so glad to see this adventure continue!
9/21/2018 c6 titansunite
ahhh I was so excited to see this updated! really good chapter, can’t wait for more
ahhh I was so excited to see this updated! really good chapter, can’t wait for more
9/20/2018 c6 Azarath Cat
Aw, poor Rachel! I like how easy it is to sympathize with her in this story. I also love new chapters! Thanks for keeping it going! Can't wait for more!
Aw, poor Rachel! I like how easy it is to sympathize with her in this story. I also love new chapters! Thanks for keeping it going! Can't wait for more!
9/17/2018 c5 Guest
Please continue, this is really really great
Please continue, this is really really great
8/2/2018 c5 Guest
This is so good! I love you’re writing, it’s super clever!
This is so good! I love you’re writing, it’s super clever!
7/19/2018 c1
2Chaotic.Coffee.Bean
Can't believe I barely found this story. It's so great! I love they way you capture Raven's innocence. Can't wait to read more!

Can't believe I barely found this story. It's so great! I love they way you capture Raven's innocence. Can't wait to read more!
5/29/2018 c4 titansunite
Ik it’s been a couple months since you updated, but I really love this story so far! I really hope you continue it!
Ik it’s been a couple months since you updated, but I really love this story so far! I really hope you continue it!
4/9/2018 c4 Azarath Cat
Keep writing! This is a good story, and too many good stories have been abandoned!
Keep writing! This is a good story, and too many good stories have been abandoned!