for An Early Start3/17/2018 c2 Phoenix
You don't need to spoil it I already get the feeling it is going to be gregninja the one to get the harem
You don't need to spoil it I already get the feeling it is going to be gregninja the one to get the harem
3/17/2018 c2 
11The Redundant Meta
I approve, that makes so much since on the poachers part you explained, I always liked the idea of Ash receiving Alolan variants. Keep it up, I'm like this.
11The Redundant MetaI approve, that makes so much since on the poachers part you explained, I always liked the idea of Ash receiving Alolan variants. Keep it up, I'm like this.
3/13/2018 c1 Dragon's Blaze
Just to clarify, their's a bit of a flame war going on, or its likely settled down thanks to a few rather aggressive poke-shippers and a few extreme Amour-shippers.
I would try to avoid either for a mouth or two until it blows over. Anyway I do hope you update regularly or at least find the time to do so. Mostly because I don't have that many regularly updating stories in my feed but also because these are pairings not seen offend.
Just to clarify, their's a bit of a flame war going on, or its likely settled down thanks to a few rather aggressive poke-shippers and a few extreme Amour-shippers.
I would try to avoid either for a mouth or two until it blows over. Anyway I do hope you update regularly or at least find the time to do so. Mostly because I don't have that many regularly updating stories in my feed but also because these are pairings not seen offend.
3/13/2018 c1 15Blue Glass Spear
Ok I that last reviewer has no idea what they are talking about. Or has actually done. Or whatever.
Anyway nice story.
15Blue Glass SpearOk I that last reviewer has no idea what they are talking about. Or has actually done. Or whatever.
Anyway nice story.
3/13/2018 c1 1Auran Ketchum
This story is good. Please do not let this dump into cancer. And by cancer I mean Serena.
1Auran KetchumThis story is good. Please do not let this dump into cancer. And by cancer I mean Serena.
3/13/2018 c1 jurassicdinodrew
will you let Ash catch Mew for she is my favorite Pokemon besides Pikachu, and maybe Dragonair and Sylveon too along with Aerodactyl, well i really hope i get to read the chapter of this story that Ash catches Mew, good luck.
will you let Ash catch Mew for she is my favorite Pokemon besides Pikachu, and maybe Dragonair and Sylveon too along with Aerodactyl, well i really hope i get to read the chapter of this story that Ash catches Mew, good luck.
3/13/2018 c1 Guest
can you let Ash catch Mew?, she is my favorite Pokemon besides Pikachu, and maybe a Dragonair and Aerodactyl too, and a Sylveon in the future too, they sound like good Pokemon for Ash to catch, good luck on your story.
can you let Ash catch Mew?, she is my favorite Pokemon besides Pikachu, and maybe a Dragonair and Aerodactyl too, and a Sylveon in the future too, they sound like good Pokemon for Ash to catch, good luck on your story.
3/12/2018 c1 Guest
I may not know how many girls u plan to add to ashs hearm but I have some that are very rarely ever paired up with ash and feel they deserve a chance with him as much as the popular female characters do they are Rosa melody (Pokemon power of one movie) bianca (johto region Pokemon Heroes movie) lyra Hilda Shauna miette (Serena's rivals) and two popular female characters may and dawn I put them in incase if u weren't sure which other girls u may want in the hearm if u are still adding some other then may and dawn I want the other girls that are very rarely ever paired up have a fair chance since they aren't really paired up with ash and don't have very many fanfics with him either
I may not know how many girls u plan to add to ashs hearm but I have some that are very rarely ever paired up with ash and feel they deserve a chance with him as much as the popular female characters do they are Rosa melody (Pokemon power of one movie) bianca (johto region Pokemon Heroes movie) lyra Hilda Shauna miette (Serena's rivals) and two popular female characters may and dawn I put them in incase if u weren't sure which other girls u may want in the hearm if u are still adding some other then may and dawn I want the other girls that are very rarely ever paired up have a fair chance since they aren't really paired up with ash and don't have very many fanfics with him either
3/12/2018 c1 ULTIMATE PETER
I like it so far but i have a question will lille and anabel be apart of the pairing?
I like it so far but i have a question will lille and anabel be apart of the pairing?