for Repetitive Dreams6/6 c40 Fire-alchemist1
Loved this story. I was almost exactly on the money with prediction of the phrophecy! I figured Victoria would take her and she would be turned as a result- bringing in her 5th life. I just didnt consider the Voltouri being part of it.
Loved this story. I was almost exactly on the money with prediction of the phrophecy! I figured Victoria would take her and she would be turned as a result- bringing in her 5th life. I just didnt consider the Voltouri being part of it.
6/6 c21 Fire-alchemist1
Possible typo? “There are three of them? Dad burn it where are they coming from?” Jasoer growled.
Unless you meant to put “Dad burn it” and Im obtuse lol.
The tribe being so cagey with the prohpecy that is likely about Bella while claiming the Swans are “part of the tribe” is surprisingly irritating to me but it also makes sense. Haha
Possible typo? “There are three of them? Dad burn it where are they coming from?” Jasoer growled.
Unless you meant to put “Dad burn it” and Im obtuse lol.
The tribe being so cagey with the prohpecy that is likely about Bella while claiming the Swans are “part of the tribe” is surprisingly irritating to me but it also makes sense. Haha
6/5 c8 Fire-alchemist1
Shout out to the A/N saying Peter “just knowing shit” isnt canon because I have seen it so much throughout the years I actually thought it mightve been mentioned in the books lol.
Love this story so far! Its a different vibe to the BxJ FF’s I gravitate towards.
Shout out to the A/N saying Peter “just knowing shit” isnt canon because I have seen it so much throughout the years I actually thought it mightve been mentioned in the books lol.
Love this story so far! Its a different vibe to the BxJ FF’s I gravitate towards.
4/23 c31 RTS
Saying hi since I’ve been reading this story and never left a review, you called the viewers out in your note at the end of this chapter haha. Thanks for writing, I'm enjoying it!
Saying hi since I’ve been reading this story and never left a review, you called the viewers out in your note at the end of this chapter haha. Thanks for writing, I'm enjoying it!
4/11 c40 lightshinesoutofdarkness
What a wonderful story! I definitely stayed up way too late finishing it, but it was well worth it. I love how you incorporated Marcus toward the end. I always enjoy fics that bring him "back to life" in one way or another.
What a wonderful story! I definitely stayed up way too late finishing it, but it was well worth it. I love how you incorporated Marcus toward the end. I always enjoy fics that bring him "back to life" in one way or another.
4/6 c40 Corey
I was going back through my old favorites, and when l saw that this had not only more chapters but was completed, l got real excited! I started reading this back when it had ten chapters. I was excited about getting the 11 chapter and then nothing else. I will login and do proper review of the new chapters (to me). So excited to reread this wonderful story and finally see how it ends!
I was going back through my old favorites, and when l saw that this had not only more chapters but was completed, l got real excited! I started reading this back when it had ten chapters. I was excited about getting the 11 chapter and then nothing else. I will login and do proper review of the new chapters (to me). So excited to reread this wonderful story and finally see how it ends!
1/27 c40 Elanor12345
This story was wonderful! I just found it yesterday and I have not stopped. I am so thankful for all the people who kept you motivated to fontinue with it. On that note, sequel? Yes, definitely. I was kind of disapointed to not hear about Marcus and his love reconnecting after soooo many years. He truly deserves his happiness.
This story was wonderful! I just found it yesterday and I have not stopped. I am so thankful for all the people who kept you motivated to fontinue with it. On that note, sequel? Yes, definitely. I was kind of disapointed to not hear about Marcus and his love reconnecting after soooo many years. He truly deserves his happiness.
1/13 c40 Green Eyed Lana Lee
Kayozm,
I stopped reading when my Mom became ill with intestinal cancer and passed April 4, 2019. Although I miss her everyday and I'm still grieving her loss, I've finally grieved enough to be able to finish your amazing and wonderful story!
So, thank you for writing it and I'll always be grateful for the kindness you extended to me.
Happy Writing, Stay Safe And Well!
Hugs!
Kayozm,
I stopped reading when my Mom became ill with intestinal cancer and passed April 4, 2019. Although I miss her everyday and I'm still grieving her loss, I've finally grieved enough to be able to finish your amazing and wonderful story!
So, thank you for writing it and I'll always be grateful for the kindness you extended to me.
Happy Writing, Stay Safe And Well!
Hugs!
12/28/2024 c40 
14uyay
Thank you, thank you, thank you for giving Marcus that hope at the end. This was a beautiful story anyway and that was the perfect ending if not actually seeing him with her.
14uyayThank you, thank you, thank you for giving Marcus that hope at the end. This was a beautiful story anyway and that was the perfect ending if not actually seeing him with her.
12/16/2024 c1 7Lullyanne
How interesting ! I'm very late joigning this party but this story looks intriguing. I'll comment as I go...
7LullyanneHow interesting ! I'm very late joigning this party but this story looks intriguing. I'll comment as I go...
12/16/2024 c2 Guest Name
Great work, and a super fun concept. With such an intense & detailed lead up, it felt like the story's climax and resolution were a bit rushed comparatively? Like we'd just gotten into this whole time spanning idea and they've realistically gotten together and started cancer treatment... and then bam - vampire, stolen, Volterra, fight scene - END! Totally glad that you completed the story, don't get me wrong, but I think there's an opportunity to flesh out the 'second half' of things, like from Victoria onwards. I did see you've mentioned a possibility for a short sequel one shot maybe - love to read that one day too :)
Great work, and a super fun concept. With such an intense & detailed lead up, it felt like the story's climax and resolution were a bit rushed comparatively? Like we'd just gotten into this whole time spanning idea and they've realistically gotten together and started cancer treatment... and then bam - vampire, stolen, Volterra, fight scene - END! Totally glad that you completed the story, don't get me wrong, but I think there's an opportunity to flesh out the 'second half' of things, like from Victoria onwards. I did see you've mentioned a possibility for a short sequel one shot maybe - love to read that one day too :)
11/11/2024 c40 Kate Exton
Hi, oh my hosh! Thank you so much for wtitting this story. I couldnt stop reading! I also love that you say what you have bren reading and giving us a little taste of these stories. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you again!
Hi, oh my hosh! Thank you so much for wtitting this story. I couldnt stop reading! I also love that you say what you have bren reading and giving us a little taste of these stories. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you again!
10/25/2024 c40 2xx Miss Bonnie xx
thank you for your story! it was wonderful and so different to any i have read before. i absolutely loved every moment of it
2xx Miss Bonnie xxthank you for your story! it was wonderful and so different to any i have read before. i absolutely loved every moment of it