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5/6/2018 c1 24Katie Duggan's Niece
I share your reaction to the tragic turns of events in CTM this season, and I am touched by your warm portrayal of Phyllis Crane. Truly both of them need support in their grief, and I suspect they will find strength in being there for each other.
4/5/2018 c1 19umgirl2000
Beautiful job. I hope to read more Tom and Barbara fanfics written by you!
3/19/2018 c1 8SmoulderingOcean
Aww, this was quite heartbreaking. Barbara was my favourite midwife too and I'm going to miss her lots.

You really captured Tom's voice. I could see him saying those words. I can absolutely see him being so heartbroken and crushed by Barbara's death that he lives for her now and is simply unable to live for himself.

It's very good of Phyllis to promise to Barbara that she'll take care of Tom, no matter what. She would absolutely do that too, so it's true to her spirit to have her make that kind of a promise.

Your English is pretty good in this. A few little errors here and there, but nothing too major.

Keep up the good work! :)

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