5/22/2020 c1 Anon
This is one of the most beautiful and haunting short fictions I have ever read. The raw emotion and pain present in each paragraph really gets through to you. You feel like 'ok now maybe things will get better somehow' but they don't. This, along with 'Alone on the Water' from the Sherlock fandom, gets the award for the 'best last line in a fic'.Truly had me crying; a fantastic job by the author!
This is one of the most beautiful and haunting short fictions I have ever read. The raw emotion and pain present in each paragraph really gets through to you. You feel like 'ok now maybe things will get better somehow' but they don't. This, along with 'Alone on the Water' from the Sherlock fandom, gets the award for the 'best last line in a fic'.Truly had me crying; a fantastic job by the author!
11/14/2018 c1 ISRHJGOIJWEJFW
Beautifully written, yet so, so tragic. Loved the ending, even though it made me cry.
Beautifully written, yet so, so tragic. Loved the ending, even though it made me cry.
8/9/2018 c1 Sonzai Taz
I was confused for a while there, but with the ending the narration starts making sense. Even with the dark theme I really enjoyed this!
I was confused for a while there, but with the ending the narration starts making sense. Even with the dark theme I really enjoyed this!
5/31/2018 c1 Star7
What the f- you went totally off the rails. Did you find some old unfinished fics on your hardrive and decide to just Frankenstein them together or what? LOL. Editing? Pah! I shall call this "unreliable narrator" LOOOLLLLL your troll game is on point XD
What the f- you went totally off the rails. Did you find some old unfinished fics on your hardrive and decide to just Frankenstein them together or what? LOL. Editing? Pah! I shall call this "unreliable narrator" LOOOLLLLL your troll game is on point XD
3/22/2018 c1 2HimuraKenji
OMG this was so... deep.
I'm almost breathless after reading this one shoot. Well done, dude. Really deep, very conscious and finished.
OMG this was so... deep.
I'm almost breathless after reading this one shoot. Well done, dude. Really deep, very conscious and finished.
3/20/2018 c1 13Saturnine.Evenflow
Wow. That was one of the best one shot I've ever read.
Akiira Sendoh's one of my favourite characters all times, and the best of all SD characters.
I think you've just wrote something that really could happen. I mean, Inoue maybe could imagined this.
Hope to read more of this (sorry for my english, it's not my primal language.
Wow. That was one of the best one shot I've ever read.
Akiira Sendoh's one of my favourite characters all times, and the best of all SD characters.
I think you've just wrote something that really could happen. I mean, Inoue maybe could imagined this.
Hope to read more of this (sorry for my english, it's not my primal language.