for Marvel at this Shinobi's Tale5/4 c44 DealerOfDeaths
liked it skimed some of. it but was good overall and know im late on finding. this gem
liked it skimed some of. it but was good overall and know im late on finding. this gem
4/6 c17 Steele Fold
This was just a random chapter I clicked on, and not even half the page in, I hate it.
This was just a random chapter I clicked on, and not even half the page in, I hate it.
3/18 c10 shadylizzard
intersting premise, but falls off after the natasha interrogation. then falls off a cliff from chapter 10-14. hoping it gets back on trakc and better
intersting premise, but falls off after the natasha interrogation. then falls off a cliff from chapter 10-14. hoping it gets back on trakc and better
12/18 c1 Soul Sendant
complete garbage, this story is a waste of time. seriously, the comments paint a clear picture, and reading it for yourself will make it doubly clear that this is some of the dumbest shit ever
complete garbage, this story is a waste of time. seriously, the comments paint a clear picture, and reading it for yourself will make it doubly clear that this is some of the dumbest shit ever
11/20/2024 c34 johnduffy7878
This story had potential but you really make it so repetitive. Every chapter naruto is called the strongest on the planet or defeats gods and yet no matter what power level he has whether he can destroy a car or a planet the fight ends with him in a coma or broken beyond repair despite having multiple healing factors and he sacrafices himself in every situation he gets in even if it causes genocide…. bruh what is wrong with you. He has clones, superspeed etc stop writing this bullshit its retarded and repetitive
This story had potential but you really make it so repetitive. Every chapter naruto is called the strongest on the planet or defeats gods and yet no matter what power level he has whether he can destroy a car or a planet the fight ends with him in a coma or broken beyond repair despite having multiple healing factors and he sacrafices himself in every situation he gets in even if it causes genocide…. bruh what is wrong with you. He has clones, superspeed etc stop writing this bullshit its retarded and repetitive
11/10/2024 c1 Darth Tenibris2
This story was published in 2018 not 2008 why the fuck do people STILL use the "beaten" trope like it's not the most overused cliche there is? Instantly that makes this story not worth reading, as the rest of it will probably be filled with dogshit of equal levels of stupid.
This story was published in 2018 not 2008 why the fuck do people STILL use the "beaten" trope like it's not the most overused cliche there is? Instantly that makes this story not worth reading, as the rest of it will probably be filled with dogshit of equal levels of stupid.
10/18/2024 c26 Guest
I can't believe you did Bucky dirty like that. I hope that Cap will be okay and Natasha comes back somehow. No offense, I love this story but some of the decisions that were made I am not crazy about.
I can't believe you did Bucky dirty like that. I hope that Cap will be okay and Natasha comes back somehow. No offense, I love this story but some of the decisions that were made I am not crazy about.
10/2/2024 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
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Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, Marvel at this Shinobi's Tale , I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
Here is my Contacts
discord : naedinefebruary
Twitter : naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
10/2/2024 c44 alec-potter
Well i hope that it gets the Naruto Nats pairing. You had one of the best starts before the plot unravelled it.
Well i hope that it gets the Naruto Nats pairing. You had one of the best starts before the plot unravelled it.