for Visions of the Mind2/17/2001 c2 
4Ariana and Clara
This is really, really, really, really, really, really...ok, I think u get the impression...good. Keep going! I'm a major fan of MWPP stories!
4Ariana and ClaraThis is really, really, really, really, really, really...ok, I think u get the impression...good. Keep going! I'm a major fan of MWPP stories!
2/16/2001 c2 Svolkame
I like the way your write. Please share more with us.
I like the way your write. Please share more with us.
2/16/2001 c2 Rebecca
Good, I guess
Good, I guess
2/16/2001 c2 5VyingQuill
How sad...GOod job, good starts, please continue, i know it's a run on sentence...
5VyingQuillHow sad...GOod job, good starts, please continue, i know it's a run on sentence...
2/16/2001 c2 4Lilly Potter
That was kinda confusing. But still a great story! Please hurry with the next part;}
4Lilly PotterThat was kinda confusing. But still a great story! Please hurry with the next part;}
2/8/2001 c1 11Ophie
That was really pretty, and very,very sad. Who was the first woman, though? That i didn't wuite understnad. Otherwise, lovely!
11OphieThat was really pretty, and very,very sad. Who was the first woman, though? That i didn't wuite understnad. Otherwise, lovely!
1/19/2001 c1 Andrew
I really don't get this one Rosemary, I don't understand at all.
I really don't get this one Rosemary, I don't understand at all.
1/9/2001 c1 1Qwyneth
So far, this is your best work yet. I would *definitely* continue this...I'm interested to know who the women are...I like your description...very artistic. You have a gift that you are coming into...and I say that from my experience reading and editing/betaing, not writing. I still advocate the use of a sharp eyed beta reader...there are a few nitpicks/suggestions I have that a beta reader would have brought up. I would offer my services but am a busy college student with barely the time to write (barely-rarely would be a better word) myself, and it's a struggle for me to keep up with email and my absolute best friend's beta reads and edits...if I offered to beta for you, I am sure I would fail you. However, if you ever have an emergency and need a beta reader on something short...I'll do what I can.
1QwynethSo far, this is your best work yet. I would *definitely* continue this...I'm interested to know who the women are...I like your description...very artistic. You have a gift that you are coming into...and I say that from my experience reading and editing/betaing, not writing. I still advocate the use of a sharp eyed beta reader...there are a few nitpicks/suggestions I have that a beta reader would have brought up. I would offer my services but am a busy college student with barely the time to write (barely-rarely would be a better word) myself, and it's a struggle for me to keep up with email and my absolute best friend's beta reads and edits...if I offered to beta for you, I am sure I would fail you. However, if you ever have an emergency and need a beta reader on something short...I'll do what I can.
12/23/2000 c1 25Lady Christina
I like the beginning of this, it's very interesting and leaves a lot to be imagined. Nice job.
25Lady ChristinaI like the beginning of this, it's very interesting and leaves a lot to be imagined. Nice job.
12/12/2000 c1 Jo
if you don't keep writing, i might just break down and cry!I loved it! Yu have to write more!
if you don't keep writing, i might just break down and cry!I loved it! Yu have to write more!