for Invincible Girl - Maiden of Fall3/23/2018 c1 Guest
Yeah! Go Pyrrha!
Qrow is Ruby's dad theory- really?
Also, nicely done with explaining Jaune's semblance and using it to bring back Amber.
Yeah! Go Pyrrha!
Qrow is Ruby's dad theory- really?
Also, nicely done with explaining Jaune's semblance and using it to bring back Amber.
3/23/2018 c1 Nerd315
an odd start but interesting
the characters seem to be completely fine after the battle (aside from Yang) especially Pyrrha who took killing ozpin, getting two auras messing her up and scream in pain and killing penny and causing the invasion like it's another Friday night.
still interesting but make the characters get effected from such traumatic experiences.
an odd start but interesting
the characters seem to be completely fine after the battle (aside from Yang) especially Pyrrha who took killing ozpin, getting two auras messing her up and scream in pain and killing penny and causing the invasion like it's another Friday night.
still interesting but make the characters get effected from such traumatic experiences.
3/23/2018 c1 
12Bomberguy789
At first, I came here to see what would have happened if Jaune had actually done his job. What I got was more of a comedy than I was hoping for, but a good comedy nonetheless. Nice work.
12Bomberguy789At first, I came here to see what would have happened if Jaune had actually done his job. What I got was more of a comedy than I was hoping for, but a good comedy nonetheless. Nice work.