
8/4/2018 c8 newtonkatelyn2
I have read this story today and I love it! I’m always looking for a good Jacob Black story and this one is great! I hope you continue with this story. I will be back whenever you update it, that’s for sure!
I have read this story today and I love it! I’m always looking for a good Jacob Black story and this one is great! I hope you continue with this story. I will be back whenever you update it, that’s for sure!
8/2/2018 c8 Guest
YES! I can't scream the louder! So good! Love it! Please keep writing!
YES! I can't scream the louder! So good! Love it! Please keep writing!
8/2/2018 c8 Mikita
I was so glad to see the little email announcing that this story had been updated, and then I read the chapter and my smile just grew bigger! Such happy developments! Now I can’t wait to read what will happen next now that they have voiced and shared their feelings! :) please be kind and don’t make us wait for too long.
I was so glad to see the little email announcing that this story had been updated, and then I read the chapter and my smile just grew bigger! Such happy developments! Now I can’t wait to read what will happen next now that they have voiced and shared their feelings! :) please be kind and don’t make us wait for too long.
8/2/2018 c8 Guest
Omg this was beyond beautiful
Omg this was beyond beautiful
7/19/2018 c7 Guest
Loving this. Update soon!
Loving this. Update soon!
6/26/2018 c7 Guest
This is so well written and making me have some Jacob feels!
This is so well written and making me have some Jacob feels!
6/18/2018 c7 Guest
OH THE TENSION OH HOW I AM LAUGHING MY GOD. Your ability to mix humor in with serious topics and weave them together so well is astonishing every time I read more of your writing.
Alana and Jake already bicker like an old married couple good lord I love it so much hahaha.
I already can't wait for the next update!
OH THE TENSION OH HOW I AM LAUGHING MY GOD. Your ability to mix humor in with serious topics and weave them together so well is astonishing every time I read more of your writing.
Alana and Jake already bicker like an old married couple good lord I love it so much hahaha.
I already can't wait for the next update!
6/14/2018 c7 Mikita
Hilarious! Couldn’t stop laughing. They are cute together, please post more of these kind of moments.
Hilarious! Couldn’t stop laughing. They are cute together, please post more of these kind of moments.
6/14/2018 c7
1stephaneeee
*runs to the made-up land of SM solely so I can find Jacob Black and shove this chapter in his face and make him read it* THIS IS SO GOOD AND YOU ARE THE MOST INCREDIBLE WRITER.
The banter was UNREAL, like, HOLY WHATTTTTTTT, it was amazing. I felt like I was sitting there eating popcorn and squealing and that's what I was basically doing the entire time I read it. The way their relationship is progressing is so indicative of their characters but I love that you're staying cognizant of all the outside stress that would factor into it.
Okay, I'm gonna read it 982590834 more times and then continue to shower you with compliments because YOU DESERVE ALL THE GOOD THINGS IN THIS WORLD.

*runs to the made-up land of SM solely so I can find Jacob Black and shove this chapter in his face and make him read it* THIS IS SO GOOD AND YOU ARE THE MOST INCREDIBLE WRITER.
The banter was UNREAL, like, HOLY WHATTTTTTTT, it was amazing. I felt like I was sitting there eating popcorn and squealing and that's what I was basically doing the entire time I read it. The way their relationship is progressing is so indicative of their characters but I love that you're staying cognizant of all the outside stress that would factor into it.
Okay, I'm gonna read it 982590834 more times and then continue to shower you with compliments because YOU DESERVE ALL THE GOOD THINGS IN THIS WORLD.
6/14/2018 c7 Ysolde-T
LOVED this :D this chapter was definitely worth the wait and I will be re reading! Loving the tension between them two, you write so well! Alana’s character is so relatable. Where is that quote from at the beginning?
LOVED this :D this chapter was definitely worth the wait and I will be re reading! Loving the tension between them two, you write so well! Alana’s character is so relatable. Where is that quote from at the beginning?
6/14/2018 c7 Guest
What a GREAT update! 3 loving all the flirting going on hehe
What a GREAT update! 3 loving all the flirting going on hehe
6/6/2018 c6 Full
PLEASE DONT MAKE THEM FALL IN LOVE JUST YET I WANT TO SEE MORE OF GROVELLING JACOB AND I just don't want this to be too cliché, you know?
PLEASE DONT MAKE THEM FALL IN LOVE JUST YET I WANT TO SEE MORE OF GROVELLING JACOB AND I just don't want this to be too cliché, you know?