6/6/2018 c6 Annabeth Cresta
I shit you know I screamed when I saw you'd updated. It's 2am and I can think if is this cliffhanger. Please update soon (of course dont put your classes or other such important stuff in your life on hold for this or something, but try to update ASAP?) I'm sorry I'm just so EXCITED

6/4/2018 c6 Ysolde-T
SO HAPPY you posted a new chapter :D absolutely loved it. good luck with your studies and hope you’re able to update soon :) cannot wait to read more :)

5/31/2018 c5 11princess-j3ss
'In her time, there were no spirit wolves' OH HUNNY YOU'VE GOT ANOTHER THING COMING.
Also oh my god her mother? I am? Tearing up and. Wow I'm speechless jsdhfkjsd.
I love that she's such a Type A personality too because wow Jacob really is going to get a run for his money, isn't it?
HE KISSED HER FOREHEAD. HE KISSED HER FOREHEAD OH MY GOD IT'S .
Good lord, I think I'm going to pass out. Also, I love how cool and collected Alana is on the outside (for the most part) but then internally it's just. SO MUCH IS HAPPENING.
Goodness gracious, I am absolutely loving this so far, and I can't wait for the next update!

5/31/2018 c3 princess-j3ss
Oh my god I'm emotional already? Jacob was always my favourite and I'm just. Loving this. Along with a more intersectional approach to issues indigeneous women face and THE HIGHWAY OF TEARS.
AND PAUL! God I'm going to say this every review but thank god you swept in and saved these characters, giving them actual personalities that are distinguishable from one another. Good lord I already love Jacob and Alana so much already, I will sail with this ship. I will Captain this ship. I need them to meet again wow.
'WHO WOULD BOTHER ASKING EMBRY' ofmsjdfhkj I'm going to need you to stop oppressing my husband in this way, thanks.

5/30/2018 c2 princess-j3ss
OH MY GOD ALANA IS HIS IMPRINT. SHE'S HIS IMPRINT. IT'S ALL HAPPENING.
Good God I love Embry and I would literally die for him. Also I love the pack moments already, and I'm already loving how they each have their own distinct character and personalities.
GOD I CAN'T WAIT FOR ALANA TO MEET THE CULLENS AND CHEW THEM ALL OUT HAHA.

5/25/2018 c5 Scds98
I lovee this story please keep updating

5/15/2018 c5 Debbie Hicks
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5/6/2018 c5 1Tollighophyne
A yes from me