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4/2/2018 c2 12GodofGreed
Well, this story is turning out to be quite different from the usual time travel story. It's going to be interesting to see what you have in mind for the future (pun intended) of this story.
4/2/2018 c2 Quaint See
Huh, I guess having Uryu struggle to remember things is justification for following the canon timeline. Ooc will either arise from your understanding of the Bleach characters, or from the things Uryu does and says to them. To be honest, the canon timeline didn't have all that many "good guys" die except for those that died pre-series or some from the Arrancar-arc like shinigami foot soldiers (Ulquiorra), civilians (Yammy), Starrk and Lilynette, Tousen/Gin, etc. Then you get to the Thousand Year Blood War and it's decided that a whole lot of the "good people" have to die. You could try to shake things up somewhat by giving Tatsuki powers as she was originally intended to, having Orihime use her powers to permanently heal Nel's mask so she can remain an adult and not have to rely on a random armband, etc. But these are just idle suggestions, you write this however you want. Enjoy your day.
3/28/2018 c1 Guest
Thus is an interesting alternative ending of Bleach. Looking forward to reading what Uryu will do differently when he travels back in time.

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