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120Rookblonkorules
Ooh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh! *hyperventilates*
THIS CHAPTER! THIS. CHAPTER! *screams*
1) the whole description of the carousel at the beginning. It was so good. So Good! And it's especially thought provoking because carousels are usually happy, they're places where kids and people have fun and enjoy themselves, but this depressing description... it drives it home that this is GOTHAM. And it also serves as a sort of foreshadowing that this will not be a happy chapter for our characters- and boy is that a bit of an understatement.
Speaking of which... I love this rendition of Tim's PTSD. You've made it realistic and angsty, but you haven't overdone it. You've remembered that this is TIM and that Tim isn't as emotional as the other Batboys. Like Bruce.
And Bruce's concern that's hovering on the edge, but isn't overbearing or even explicitly shown at first, but just there- that was written so well. You've hit all the right feels.
Here's looking forward to chapter 17, because seriously, I'm honestly... I'm gonna be thinking about this for quite some time.
120RookblonkorulesOoh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh! *hyperventilates*
THIS CHAPTER! THIS. CHAPTER! *screams*
1) the whole description of the carousel at the beginning. It was so good. So Good! And it's especially thought provoking because carousels are usually happy, they're places where kids and people have fun and enjoy themselves, but this depressing description... it drives it home that this is GOTHAM. And it also serves as a sort of foreshadowing that this will not be a happy chapter for our characters- and boy is that a bit of an understatement.
Speaking of which... I love this rendition of Tim's PTSD. You've made it realistic and angsty, but you haven't overdone it. You've remembered that this is TIM and that Tim isn't as emotional as the other Batboys. Like Bruce.
And Bruce's concern that's hovering on the edge, but isn't overbearing or even explicitly shown at first, but just there- that was written so well. You've hit all the right feels.
Here's looking forward to chapter 17, because seriously, I'm honestly... I'm gonna be thinking about this for quite some time.
8/14/2018 c16 Mar
As always your chapters are amazing!
As always your chapters are amazing!
8/6/2018 c15 23orangesunset12
OH now Bruce is here? And Tim was in Jason's hideout? Wow, even more revelations! I love this so much, as you can probably tell, and I can barely guess what's going to happen next! Update soon!
23orangesunset12OH now Bruce is here? And Tim was in Jason's hideout? Wow, even more revelations! I love this so much, as you can probably tell, and I can barely guess what's going to happen next! Update soon!
8/6/2018 c15 14blatherin-blatherskite
I love this so much. It’s well written, it’s mysterious, it’s everything that makes a fic worth going back to. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
14blatherin-blatherskiteI love this so much. It’s well written, it’s mysterious, it’s everything that makes a fic worth going back to. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
8/6/2018 c15 120Rookblonkorules
THIS CHAPTER WAS SUCH A BLESSING YOU HAVE NO IDEA!
Okay, so... you already know I've been aching for Dick and Tim and Tim and Bruce, but I didn't dare hope we'd get Tim and JASON, but we did and not only that, but it looks like the next chapter is warming up for some Tim and Bruce interaction?
I'm in heaven. You, Shiro, you are an angel. You somehow managed to give me exactly what I needed and I didn't even know I needed it.
I really love the interaction you've got going between Tim and Jason. Jason is so distant... and yet you can see the heart beneath that. What happened to Tim has suddenly put them on the same footing with each other and maybe they're both seeing a bit of a kindred spirit in the other. AND ASKHFDJS I just LOVED THIS SO MUCH!
Also, you deserve to pat yourself on the back because this is one of the best, the BEST, interpretations of Jason that I have ever seen.
120RookblonkorulesTHIS CHAPTER WAS SUCH A BLESSING YOU HAVE NO IDEA!
Okay, so... you already know I've been aching for Dick and Tim and Tim and Bruce, but I didn't dare hope we'd get Tim and JASON, but we did and not only that, but it looks like the next chapter is warming up for some Tim and Bruce interaction?
I'm in heaven. You, Shiro, you are an angel. You somehow managed to give me exactly what I needed and I didn't even know I needed it.
I really love the interaction you've got going between Tim and Jason. Jason is so distant... and yet you can see the heart beneath that. What happened to Tim has suddenly put them on the same footing with each other and maybe they're both seeing a bit of a kindred spirit in the other. AND ASKHFDJS I just LOVED THIS SO MUCH!
Also, you deserve to pat yourself on the back because this is one of the best, the BEST, interpretations of Jason that I have ever seen.
8/4/2018 c14 Guest
This is such an amazing story! The way that you write Tim and the way you describe his feelings is so well done!
This is such an amazing story! The way that you write Tim and the way you describe his feelings is so well done!
7/30/2018 c14 23orangesunset12
Oh gosh I feel so bad for Tim, well actually I feel bad for everyone here. Dick honestly is so sweet here and yet I totally understand Tim feeling like he's not his former self. There better be a happy ending to all of this! I really hope the next chapter's coming out soon!
23orangesunset12Oh gosh I feel so bad for Tim, well actually I feel bad for everyone here. Dick honestly is so sweet here and yet I totally understand Tim feeling like he's not his former self. There better be a happy ending to all of this! I really hope the next chapter's coming out soon!
7/30/2018 c14 120Rookblonkorules
You've written the interactions between Dick and Tim so wonderfully. Dick it feels like, is just trying to ease them both back into the life they had before, but on Tim's end there are so many things standing in the way, such as his loss of memory and the scar on his back (which I'm really curious about still, btw. And I'm really hoping Dick finds out about it soon. Whatever it means, it's a burden Tim shouldn't have to carry alone.)
I feel like this must be really painful for Dick because on the one hand, he has his brother back. On the other hand, he doesn't... not completely. Tim doesn't remember and that's kind of... a bit of a gap between them. But Dick is still there for him and that's just... that's so canon!Dick. He's unconditionally there for the people he loves, be it Barbara, Bruce, Damian etc.
And then Tim feels like he has to deal with this on his own too and... that's also canon!Tim and it hurts my heart right now because that kid is going to need his big brother before all this is over I'm sure.
120RookblonkorulesYou've written the interactions between Dick and Tim so wonderfully. Dick it feels like, is just trying to ease them both back into the life they had before, but on Tim's end there are so many things standing in the way, such as his loss of memory and the scar on his back (which I'm really curious about still, btw. And I'm really hoping Dick finds out about it soon. Whatever it means, it's a burden Tim shouldn't have to carry alone.)
I feel like this must be really painful for Dick because on the one hand, he has his brother back. On the other hand, he doesn't... not completely. Tim doesn't remember and that's kind of... a bit of a gap between them. But Dick is still there for him and that's just... that's so canon!Dick. He's unconditionally there for the people he loves, be it Barbara, Bruce, Damian etc.
And then Tim feels like he has to deal with this on his own too and... that's also canon!Tim and it hurts my heart right now because that kid is going to need his big brother before all this is over I'm sure.
7/26/2018 c13 Guest
Great! This chapter really puts it all together!
-Loftcat27
Great! This chapter really puts it all together!
-Loftcat27
7/24/2018 c13 23orangesunset12
This was incredible! I need more soon! The atmosphere, the dialogue, the beautiful connection between Tim and Dick, this was all absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for this!
23orangesunset12This was incredible! I need more soon! The atmosphere, the dialogue, the beautiful connection between Tim and Dick, this was all absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for this!
7/23/2018 c13 Guest
I felt so many emotions this chapter and i am so happy to finally see dick and tim together like that again!
I felt so many emotions this chapter and i am so happy to finally see dick and tim together like that again!
7/23/2018 c13 AnonymousMisfit
I'm... I'm crying?
This chapter was loaded with emotions, and I just can't handle these feelings you're giving me.
Like, oh my God, Dick *knows* and they *hugged* and so many other things-
I love your writing, and your stories! I don't review much, but I'm leaving this one because you need to know how amazing you are at writing. It's so... seamless, the way you do.
I'm leaving this on my behalf, and that of AndAnotherOneBitesTheDust's. She hasn't been able to do anything lately, because she's been really *insanely* busy.
But she recommended you, and I couldn't be happier to have listened.
You've got amazing talent, and I so look forward to more.
I'm... I'm crying?
This chapter was loaded with emotions, and I just can't handle these feelings you're giving me.
Like, oh my God, Dick *knows* and they *hugged* and so many other things-
I love your writing, and your stories! I don't review much, but I'm leaving this one because you need to know how amazing you are at writing. It's so... seamless, the way you do.
I'm leaving this on my behalf, and that of AndAnotherOneBitesTheDust's. She hasn't been able to do anything lately, because she's been really *insanely* busy.
But she recommended you, and I couldn't be happier to have listened.
You've got amazing talent, and I so look forward to more.