for Genesis3/30/2018 c2 RainAndMist
I really enjoyed how you described Tim’s pain and disorientation. It felt real and I have the feels I’m interested to see how it develops. What is the strange symbol carved onto his back? How could he have been lost to the bat family? I sincerely hope one of his brothers finds him and soon! Thank you for writing this! I can’t wait to read more!
I really enjoyed how you described Tim’s pain and disorientation. It felt real and I have the feels I’m interested to see how it develops. What is the strange symbol carved onto his back? How could he have been lost to the bat family? I sincerely hope one of his brothers finds him and soon! Thank you for writing this! I can’t wait to read more!
3/29/2018 c2 
25AndAnotherOneBitesTheDust
Timmy ;-;
Neat chapter! I think it was packed really well. You told us enough and didn't rush into anything. This chapter was focused on Tim's waking thoughts and feelings, no? If it wasn't, that's my bad, but that's basically what I gathered. You have a description of his physical features and how he was handling... Whatever happened to him. I take it B has no clue he's alive or where he is since he's in "Berlin". And Gotham's in Jersey... Nice t'know. I've got a bit of a headache myself, Timmers, so you're not alone. I really like the way you described Tim and the way he feels about his memory. The water comparison was ingenious! I wouldn't have thought about it unless I stared at the blinking bar on the word document for at least an hour and a half. I completely agree with that. Forgetting stuff isn't fun, so sucks that Timmy's forgotten *himself*. Don't worry Tim! One of your brother's will find you! ...I think!
...I hope?
Oh well! I'll just wait for the next chapter to find out :D
Can't wait!
25AndAnotherOneBitesTheDustTimmy ;-;
Neat chapter! I think it was packed really well. You told us enough and didn't rush into anything. This chapter was focused on Tim's waking thoughts and feelings, no? If it wasn't, that's my bad, but that's basically what I gathered. You have a description of his physical features and how he was handling... Whatever happened to him. I take it B has no clue he's alive or where he is since he's in "Berlin". And Gotham's in Jersey... Nice t'know. I've got a bit of a headache myself, Timmers, so you're not alone. I really like the way you described Tim and the way he feels about his memory. The water comparison was ingenious! I wouldn't have thought about it unless I stared at the blinking bar on the word document for at least an hour and a half. I completely agree with that. Forgetting stuff isn't fun, so sucks that Timmy's forgotten *himself*. Don't worry Tim! One of your brother's will find you! ...I think!
...I hope?
Oh well! I'll just wait for the next chapter to find out :D
Can't wait!
3/27/2018 c1 RainAndMist
Looks like it will be shaping up so be so amazing! I am looking forward to reading more from you! This just gets me in the feels. Thank you for writing this !
Looks like it will be shaping up so be so amazing! I am looking forward to reading more from you! This just gets me in the feels. Thank you for writing this !
3/26/2018 c1 AndAnotherOneBitesTheDust
*Whistle* Damn, that was pretty angsty. (Lol, but who am I to talk about angst?) This was a really good start! I'm looking forward to reading whatever may come in the future ;) I'll be glad to stick it out with you through the end! If I can, I'll leave a Review, promise. I'm really excited to see where this story goes, and I might have an idea if the cover is any hint (it's real cool, by the way). Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Happy writing!
*Whistle* Damn, that was pretty angsty. (Lol, but who am I to talk about angst?) This was a really good start! I'm looking forward to reading whatever may come in the future ;) I'll be glad to stick it out with you through the end! If I can, I'll leave a Review, promise. I'm really excited to see where this story goes, and I might have an idea if the cover is any hint (it's real cool, by the way). Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Happy writing!