for The Green in the Grey9/22 c23 Guest
Disgusting pyschotic trash, anyone who thinks it's acceptable to believe or think it is anything other the BS for Harry to forgive the people that abandoned him to be beten and starved are lunatics who should never be allowed to procreate. I don't care what BS excuses you use to try to justify it, it doesn't matter if they supposedly were manipulated, it doesn't matter if they believed the wrong person. The fact is nothing Albus said should have been able to convince them to abandon their son. Also the morons who want to try to argue that they regretted it the next day, well tough shit, it's too late to regret and that regret sure as shit doesn't absolve you. Stories that force that outcome are just straight up fucking disturbing.
Disgusting pyschotic trash, anyone who thinks it's acceptable to believe or think it is anything other the BS for Harry to forgive the people that abandoned him to be beten and starved are lunatics who should never be allowed to procreate. I don't care what BS excuses you use to try to justify it, it doesn't matter if they supposedly were manipulated, it doesn't matter if they believed the wrong person. The fact is nothing Albus said should have been able to convince them to abandon their son. Also the morons who want to try to argue that they regretted it the next day, well tough shit, it's too late to regret and that regret sure as shit doesn't absolve you. Stories that force that outcome are just straight up fucking disturbing.
9/22 c19 Guest
The stories where they have the potters abandon Harry and then plot force him, and it IS a plot force because no one would forgive shit stains like that, are completely unbelievable to the point of destroying the story and making it retarded nonsense.
The stories where they have the potters abandon Harry and then plot force him, and it IS a plot force because no one would forgive shit stains like that, are completely unbelievable to the point of destroying the story and making it retarded nonsense.
8/25 c5 RK
im confused:
why is tonks claiming harry didnt tell her when he actualy did?
they talked about why he dislikes her ability to change her apearance and he said the dursleys in private locked him in a cupboard beat him up and let him starve.
why would tonks shake her head no, to sirious?
im confused:
why is tonks claiming harry didnt tell her when he actualy did?
they talked about why he dislikes her ability to change her apearance and he said the dursleys in private locked him in a cupboard beat him up and let him starve.
why would tonks shake her head no, to sirious?
8/26 c3 SleepingFox09
I understand this is one of your first stories and it shows how much you improved after that. The beginning was really confusing and the addition of an OC like Leo felt very unnecessary. I guess I'll leave it over here, thanks.
I understand this is one of your first stories and it shows how much you improved after that. The beginning was really confusing and the addition of an OC like Leo felt very unnecessary. I guess I'll leave it over here, thanks.
68/8 c5 TheMuzicMan
"Has Harry told you about his time with his muggle relative?"
Tonks shook her head"
He told her when they pranked Sirius?
"Has Harry told you about his time with his muggle relative?"
Tonks shook her head"
He told her when they pranked Sirius?
7/20 c4 Guest
Yeah it's not getting better at all, this entire thing needs to be deleted and rewritten it's garbage
Yeah it's not getting better at all, this entire thing needs to be deleted and rewritten it's garbage
7/20 c3 Guest
Crap so far, I'll give it a few more chapters but I doubt it will get better.
Crap so far, I'll give it a few more chapters but I doubt it will get better.
7/19 c11 BIRD0FHERMES
I wont lie, when Leo offered to take Katie back to Hogwarts I genuinely thought he was offering to fight Mcgonagall, lol
I wont lie, when Leo offered to take Katie back to Hogwarts I genuinely thought he was offering to fight Mcgonagall, lol
7/10 c3 Lewis James Potter
I am confused as to time line . if this is 1994 he and original timeline people are 14 and in 4thb year not 6th
I am confused as to time line . if this is 1994 he and original timeline people are 14 and in 4thb year not 6th
6/27 c6 Volunteer Insomniac
this really needs timestamps, because in my mind harry and tonks only met days ago, but if my research is correct its been a month between harrys name being selected and the first task, which is why i was confused why harry and tonks are so close already.
and i didn't any signs of them growing closer over the months, from my perspective they met, packed sirius, and now they're attached at the waist.
this really needs timestamps, because in my mind harry and tonks only met days ago, but if my research is correct its been a month between harrys name being selected and the first task, which is why i was confused why harry and tonks are so close already.
and i didn't any signs of them growing closer over the months, from my perspective they met, packed sirius, and now they're attached at the waist.
6/26 c4 Volunteer Insomniac
you have a habit of telling us about the characters rather that showing us, instead of letting us get to know the characters through interactions, you just go into first person and walk us through how they think and why they think it, and personally I'm not too fond of it, I understand when it's just the main character, but when it happens to nearly every important character it gets old pretty quick
you have a habit of telling us about the characters rather that showing us, instead of letting us get to know the characters through interactions, you just go into first person and walk us through how they think and why they think it, and personally I'm not too fond of it, I understand when it's just the main character, but when it happens to nearly every important character it gets old pretty quick