
4/16/2020 c13 Re Lovely Lover
I think rather than yandere just making her a bit more... willful, empowered? would be good.
For example:
Him being asked by Hinata if he still desires Sakura only to be told he does. As "their" pet.
Coaxing Hinata into imagining sitting in the hokage seat with him massaging her shoulders as he gives her Sakuras leash and is serviced by her who had been servicing him.
Keeping Hinata rather submissive and obedient but more empowered and determined. The submissiveness being more of a heavy loyalty than a timid submissiveness.
Sakura however working that attitude out of her and making her more submissive and obedient maybe to the point of masochism. Not the heavy kind. Just being dominated which isna 180 to what she has.
Having a man want her and play her body like a fiddle willing to do whatever she has to, to keep enjoying what it is to be his woman. Even happily dropping Sasuke and taking Hinata as her mistress and Naruto her master.
Hope he coaxes Tenten into his harem too having her move in. Even teasing the opportunity to find out what her idol Tsunade tastes like.
Hinata his wife and number 1 as the one who pursued him from the beginning. Tsunade his "co-alpha" who keeps the reigns of his harem second to him but works with and helps Hinata with running things and boosting her confidence in managing things with his building harem.
I think rather than yandere just making her a bit more... willful, empowered? would be good.
For example:
Him being asked by Hinata if he still desires Sakura only to be told he does. As "their" pet.
Coaxing Hinata into imagining sitting in the hokage seat with him massaging her shoulders as he gives her Sakuras leash and is serviced by her who had been servicing him.
Keeping Hinata rather submissive and obedient but more empowered and determined. The submissiveness being more of a heavy loyalty than a timid submissiveness.
Sakura however working that attitude out of her and making her more submissive and obedient maybe to the point of masochism. Not the heavy kind. Just being dominated which isna 180 to what she has.
Having a man want her and play her body like a fiddle willing to do whatever she has to, to keep enjoying what it is to be his woman. Even happily dropping Sasuke and taking Hinata as her mistress and Naruto her master.
Hope he coaxes Tenten into his harem too having her move in. Even teasing the opportunity to find out what her idol Tsunade tastes like.
Hinata his wife and number 1 as the one who pursued him from the beginning. Tsunade his "co-alpha" who keeps the reigns of his harem second to him but works with and helps Hinata with running things and boosting her confidence in managing things with his building harem.
4/15/2020 c16 DainBramagedMoFo
All these chapters, for me have good reasonable ebb and flow. Tsunade's happiness is another place where canon let me down. Really enjoying your vision here with these fun adventurous stories. I'm sure all other women of Naruto will receive their joy during individual and collective development arcs. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
All these chapters, for me have good reasonable ebb and flow. Tsunade's happiness is another place where canon let me down. Really enjoying your vision here with these fun adventurous stories. I'm sure all other women of Naruto will receive their joy during individual and collective development arcs. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
4/15/2020 c15 DainBramagedMoFo
This portends a fun holiday for both. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
This portends a fun holiday for both. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
4/15/2020 c14 DainBramagedMoFo
After all the canon heaviness piled onto Naruto by the brooding uchia princess and Sakura, this is one interesting method to train the deprived and wanton mother to be. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
After all the canon heaviness piled onto Naruto by the brooding uchia princess and Sakura, this is one interesting method to train the deprived and wanton mother to be. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
4/15/2020 c13 DainBramagedMoFo
I'm anticipating good stories for all his girls. None of these kunoichi or Ayame received enough time in canon. Each girl he has or is targeting deserves exposing, exploring, enjoying, their growth, the depths of individual and group chatacters, etc.. Everyone of them have their places with Naruto individually, while it shouldn't be difficult to develop not only all these girls regularly weaving through his life, the women can all easily be involved in each other's mutual needs for care and support. This whole clan based society creates a need for many to form alternatives to what should be family bonding, caring, loving, sharing of burdens, etc...Even for hardened killers many are still human. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
I'm anticipating good stories for all his girls. None of these kunoichi or Ayame received enough time in canon. Each girl he has or is targeting deserves exposing, exploring, enjoying, their growth, the depths of individual and group chatacters, etc.. Everyone of them have their places with Naruto individually, while it shouldn't be difficult to develop not only all these girls regularly weaving through his life, the women can all easily be involved in each other's mutual needs for care and support. This whole clan based society creates a need for many to form alternatives to what should be family bonding, caring, loving, sharing of burdens, etc...Even for hardened killers many are still human. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
4/15/2020 c12 DainBramagedMoFo
I'm glad it's not Sakura bashing like most. To me the kunoichi of team 7 was growing in most ways the same as Naruto (everyone progresses at their own pace). It seems in canon Sakura settled for brooding problem boy instead of being happy as second wife or beloved mistress of ever faithfully true hero Naruto. Sakura in canon is recognized by Tsunade as being her disciple that even surpasses her in some ways to further develop medical care. Thanks, be well, stay safe, God's speed.
I'm glad it's not Sakura bashing like most. To me the kunoichi of team 7 was growing in most ways the same as Naruto (everyone progresses at their own pace). It seems in canon Sakura settled for brooding problem boy instead of being happy as second wife or beloved mistress of ever faithfully true hero Naruto. Sakura in canon is recognized by Tsunade as being her disciple that even surpasses her in some ways to further develop medical care. Thanks, be well, stay safe, God's speed.