
4/4/2018 c2 Guest
slythefoxx2 you do not like it, do not read but you exaggerate it is 5 times better than np A Strange Vacation under username Nidoran Duran . there, it's hideous I'm curious what you would say about that shit together with your beloved hinata because there is presented like a whore .
slythefoxx2 you do not like it, do not read but you exaggerate it is 5 times better than np A Strange Vacation under username Nidoran Duran . there, it's hideous I'm curious what you would say about that shit together with your beloved hinata because there is presented like a whore .
4/4/2018 c2
12slythefoxx2
Your Naruto just seems to have a disdain for women that makes any interaction, especially sexual ones, odious. If there were a hint of genuine affection instead of crass manipulation then that'd be one thing but abusing Hinata's trust and having gained her affections through a well crafted lie? Not particularly engaging. Also raises some consent issues as she visibly wasn't comfortable but he was taking advantage of the same patriarchal culture he cited as Ino's difficulty with finding someone.
The women are just things. They are in a lot of harems, probably most, but at least there is some sense that all parties care about the ones involved. Their is darkness, there are grey situations and then there is just men who don't like women as anything more than places to put their dick. The latter isn't unique nor underrepresented. I don't think this is for me.

Your Naruto just seems to have a disdain for women that makes any interaction, especially sexual ones, odious. If there were a hint of genuine affection instead of crass manipulation then that'd be one thing but abusing Hinata's trust and having gained her affections through a well crafted lie? Not particularly engaging. Also raises some consent issues as she visibly wasn't comfortable but he was taking advantage of the same patriarchal culture he cited as Ino's difficulty with finding someone.
The women are just things. They are in a lot of harems, probably most, but at least there is some sense that all parties care about the ones involved. Their is darkness, there are grey situations and then there is just men who don't like women as anything more than places to put their dick. The latter isn't unique nor underrepresented. I don't think this is for me.
4/4/2018 c2 Guest
I like it a lot. naruto spoil the hinata the same with all beautiful women hehe .
I like it a lot. naruto spoil the hinata the same with all beautiful women hehe .
4/4/2018 c2 sinedd662
it was a good chapter . bet naruto with ino is curious to see how it develops . one thing interested me, I thought that ino is in connection with saj .
it was a good chapter . bet naruto with ino is curious to see how it develops . one thing interested me, I thought that ino is in connection with saj .
4/4/2018 c2 Guest
Hinata isn't Naruto's fiancee. He's treating her as a toy while he goes around sleeping with numerous women. She can do better than to be with a guy that only cheats on her. She need to wake up and find another guy than be a servant in Naruto's dumb harem.
Hinata isn't Naruto's fiancee. He's treating her as a toy while he goes around sleeping with numerous women. She can do better than to be with a guy that only cheats on her. She need to wake up and find another guy than be a servant in Naruto's dumb harem.
4/2/2018 c1 DarthKakuzu
Strange. I don't usually like darker Naruto fanfics and I usually despise naruhina fanfics. Yet somehow I like this story. Add in that you've got ino and temari planned and you've got me really excited for what comes next.
Please continue,
DK
Strange. I don't usually like darker Naruto fanfics and I usually despise naruhina fanfics. Yet somehow I like this story. Add in that you've got ino and temari planned and you've got me really excited for what comes next.
Please continue,
DK
4/2/2018 c1 thanatos's-shadow
This naruto is honestly better than the ninja Jesus kishimoto gave us. Though I do feel you're overplaying Hinata's submissiveness. I feel she'd be more than ready to fuck Naruto or let him molested her since she's wanted him for most of her life. I mean she's a kunoichi so it's quite possible she broke her hymen in training. So even with the Byakugan no one would ever know unless she was taken in for a medical exam.
This naruto is honestly better than the ninja Jesus kishimoto gave us. Though I do feel you're overplaying Hinata's submissiveness. I feel she'd be more than ready to fuck Naruto or let him molested her since she's wanted him for most of her life. I mean she's a kunoichi so it's quite possible she broke her hymen in training. So even with the Byakugan no one would ever know unless she was taken in for a medical exam.
4/1/2018 c1
5Tenma Sosei
Interesting concept. But come on, its a high possibility she did masterbate to Naruto when she was younger. But at the sametime it would be impossible with the amount of family members walking around.

Interesting concept. But come on, its a high possibility she did masterbate to Naruto when she was younger. But at the sametime it would be impossible with the amount of family members walking around.
4/1/2018 c1 BorderLand
Oh hell yes, a sociopath Naruto with a thing for mass manipulation and crazy sex drive.
Oh hell yes, a sociopath Naruto with a thing for mass manipulation and crazy sex drive.
3/31/2018 c1 WindyCitySlayer1
Awesome chapter
Can’t wait for more
Please continue
Yes naruto is a boss
Awesome chapter
Can’t wait for more
Please continue
Yes naruto is a boss