
3/31/2018 c1
29The Dark Dragen
Interesting, a twisted Naruto by looks of things, I like and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Interesting, a twisted Naruto by looks of things, I like and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
3/31/2018 c1 Batros940
Could be interesting. Just a shame you only have Naruto be smart after the war. Would like to see a Naruto story like this when he is smart after he returns from his training trip with Jiriaya.
Could be interesting. Just a shame you only have Naruto be smart after the war. Would like to see a Naruto story like this when he is smart after he returns from his training trip with Jiriaya.
3/31/2018 c1 sinedd662
it was cool . I want to see sakura cuckold sasuke from naruto . let him seduce and manipulate and he knows her best so it will not be so difficult and then spoil her would I feel guilty about sasgay cheating . .it would be best if it her dominated it . you can also do as sakura is watching as naruto fucks hinata and as he says and as he dirty says and make her horny
it was cool . I want to see sakura cuckold sasuke from naruto . let him seduce and manipulate and he knows her best so it will not be so difficult and then spoil her would I feel guilty about sasgay cheating . .it would be best if it her dominated it . you can also do as sakura is watching as naruto fucks hinata and as he says and as he dirty says and make her horny
3/31/2018 c1
1kuro02
usually i'm nt fond of dark naruto stories
but this one have a great start so i'll stick with it

usually i'm nt fond of dark naruto stories
but this one have a great start so i'll stick with it
3/31/2018 c1
2Reaper's Blaze
"Why would he care about the opinions of the people that did their best to ostracize, cheat, and if they had the opportunity, hurt him when he was just a defenseless child."
Oh wow it's gonna be one of those fics, another unoriginal mess made by someone who both doesn't understand Naruto as either a series or a character.
But because people on this site don't quality or good writing they'll flock to this anyway because you have passable grammar.

"Why would he care about the opinions of the people that did their best to ostracize, cheat, and if they had the opportunity, hurt him when he was just a defenseless child."
Oh wow it's gonna be one of those fics, another unoriginal mess made by someone who both doesn't understand Naruto as either a series or a character.
But because people on this site don't quality or good writing they'll flock to this anyway because you have passable grammar.