
4/23/2018 c6
6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. I am sorry if I am annoying you with my reviews it's just that I really like your story a lot.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. I am sorry if I am annoying you with my reviews it's just that I really like your story a lot.
4/23/2018 c6 darickb
I am really enjoying this story. This is the kind of story that I check to see if it was updated twice a day because of how much I look forward to reading the next chapter! Great work! Cheers!
I am really enjoying this story. This is the kind of story that I check to see if it was updated twice a day because of how much I look forward to reading the next chapter! Great work! Cheers!
4/21/2018 c5
31529
A pretty good chapter, although some things seemed to be off... there are gaps and some pretty major hypocrisies in Harrys treatment of Hermione this chapter. If these were intended them that's fine, as it is pretty realistic for someone who isn't very introspective or someone who is rather impulsive (and canon Harry is).
Thanks for writing.

A pretty good chapter, although some things seemed to be off... there are gaps and some pretty major hypocrisies in Harrys treatment of Hermione this chapter. If these were intended them that's fine, as it is pretty realistic for someone who isn't very introspective or someone who is rather impulsive (and canon Harry is).
Thanks for writing.
4/18/2018 c5
29The Dark Dragen
Oh great work mate, loving the story, and I hope to see some lemons in this story when the time is right...

Oh great work mate, loving the story, and I hope to see some lemons in this story when the time is right...
4/16/2018 c5 skifast
damn didn't realize this was your first story I definitely like the start. keep it up looking forward to the next chapter
damn didn't realize this was your first story I definitely like the start. keep it up looking forward to the next chapter
4/15/2018 c5
1Ollivander7
Really great story so far. I think you're firing on all cylinders and have done a marvelous job so far. Cant wait for more.

Really great story so far. I think you're firing on all cylinders and have done a marvelous job so far. Cant wait for more.
4/13/2018 c5 Guest
Love your style of writing keep it up!
Love your style of writing keep it up!
4/13/2018 c5 magitech
Nice
I think you are absolutely correct in the reason Harry seems to have so few friends.
no one want to associate with Ron and especially not Granger. While Ron is unpleasant, Granger is an obnoxious, self righteous harpy who never listens to anyone and doens't have a thought in her head that isn't straight out of a textbook.
I bet if Harry was waiting in Granger's room and she came out of the bath room in nothing but a towel she'd ahve screamed the whole city down, yet she thinks it acceptable for her to do it to Harry, much like she charges into the boys dorm at Hogwarts whenever she wants.
Nice
I think you are absolutely correct in the reason Harry seems to have so few friends.
no one want to associate with Ron and especially not Granger. While Ron is unpleasant, Granger is an obnoxious, self righteous harpy who never listens to anyone and doens't have a thought in her head that isn't straight out of a textbook.
I bet if Harry was waiting in Granger's room and she came out of the bath room in nothing but a towel she'd ahve screamed the whole city down, yet she thinks it acceptable for her to do it to Harry, much like she charges into the boys dorm at Hogwarts whenever she wants.