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4/1/2018 c1 Dault3883 Barron Backslash
good chapter your doing good and i hope you beat the cancer
4/1/2018 c1 Twiztedcj
more plz
4/1/2018 c1 Okami no Shinigami
Well Tuck you're off to a good running start with this chapter nice to finaly see some new Honks in the works like the idea behind Nym joining the order of the flaming turkey/Phoenix (depending on whether or not it's a bad Dumbles) I'd like to see a badass (But not to powerful) Harry hope to see more soon.
4/1/2018 c1 3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Fun first chapter and great that Harry and Tonks have met up. Thanks for sharing!
3/31/2018 c1 8hotkillerz
Ok first thing first it has a good start. BUT now to the criticism of the story. Harry is he over powered? if so is he going to be god like? When does this story take place? Also im guessing if he is in a pub drinking whiskey he must have a fake id or something but that goes back to the when is this set stroyline. As i can see it looks like there will be some dum-as-a-door bashing. will there be any other type of bashing? im guessing if your setting tonks up with harry lupin is out of the picture and might be getting bashed or are you going to have them on sirus and harrys side and set him up with someone else?
How often is the story going to be updated? are you going to explan how hes a meta? cant wait for the next chapter.
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