
11/14/2020 c1
4HoosYourDaddy
Nice work. That was a well-written and fun mystery, if a bit on the inconsequential side. It would be neat to the premise expanded into a full story.

Nice work. That was a well-written and fun mystery, if a bit on the inconsequential side. It would be neat to the premise expanded into a full story.
9/19/2020 c1 SilverFishK
Interesting take at training and well written. And lisa doesn't get enough time in ff
Interesting take at training and well written. And lisa doesn't get enough time in ff
4/13/2019 c1
2CheddarTrek
Great story, thanks for writing!
Please compete in DLP's competition again - wonderful to see new works like this coming out in the fandom. Great standard 'short story' length out of this one too.

Great story, thanks for writing!
Please compete in DLP's competition again - wonderful to see new works like this coming out in the fandom. Great standard 'short story' length out of this one too.
12/24/2018 c1
28iNiGmA
Hey I finally got around to checking out your other stuff! So sorry it took so long! But yay - holiday break, reading time.
What an awesome concept this is! This was just brilliant. I could not stop reading, as with your other story, I was so intrigued in trying to figure out your plot twist - which I did not. You do mystery really well! And of course, your writing is flawless once again. Really, I hope you have something original in the works, because I feel like you'd do wonderfully with that.
LOVE the description of Lisa driving - hahaha!
Seems like Harry has a bit of an unfair advantage over Lisa, since he can learn from her mistakes here and make her test harder. But I'm sure he will be entirely fair, of course!
Oh man, you said you are not writing more, but I'll be wondering what Harry has planned for Lisa all day, damnit.
Anyway thanks for this excellent story. You are really a wonderful writer. I'm going to have to be more proactive about reading your other stories!
Rina

Hey I finally got around to checking out your other stuff! So sorry it took so long! But yay - holiday break, reading time.
What an awesome concept this is! This was just brilliant. I could not stop reading, as with your other story, I was so intrigued in trying to figure out your plot twist - which I did not. You do mystery really well! And of course, your writing is flawless once again. Really, I hope you have something original in the works, because I feel like you'd do wonderfully with that.
LOVE the description of Lisa driving - hahaha!
Seems like Harry has a bit of an unfair advantage over Lisa, since he can learn from her mistakes here and make her test harder. But I'm sure he will be entirely fair, of course!
Oh man, you said you are not writing more, but I'll be wondering what Harry has planned for Lisa all day, damnit.
Anyway thanks for this excellent story. You are really a wonderful writer. I'm going to have to be more proactive about reading your other stories!
Rina
9/8/2018 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
Fine vignette, with a smooth engaging narrative.
Always good to see a competent Harry who still has realistic foibles.
Thanks for posting.
Fine vignette, with a smooth engaging narrative.
Always good to see a competent Harry who still has realistic foibles.
Thanks for posting.