9/14/2012 c8 15Mana-sensei
usually i don't read Harry Potter fic but wow i really love this one :)
update soon!
usually i don't read Harry Potter fic but wow i really love this one :)
update soon!
7/18/2011 c8 JustR
I found this story while lookin through random HP fiction.
This story has great potential. Slash lovers do love jealousy and competition in a story. Especially if the prize is Harry c;
I'm not sure if you'll ever update, but hopefully you will. And if not it would be nice to be informed that this will be discontinued.
The plot itself is amazing. I enjoy it a lot, thought you do have grammar problems, but that can easy be fixed. And the characters are a bit OOC, but that's okay!
It would so great to see this story continued. Hopefully you will? (:
I found this story while lookin through random HP fiction.
This story has great potential. Slash lovers do love jealousy and competition in a story. Especially if the prize is Harry c;
I'm not sure if you'll ever update, but hopefully you will. And if not it would be nice to be informed that this will be discontinued.
The plot itself is amazing. I enjoy it a lot, thought you do have grammar problems, but that can easy be fixed. And the characters are a bit OOC, but that's okay!
It would so great to see this story continued. Hopefully you will? (:
1/24/2011 c8 1KitsuneDango
gosh dangit plz let malfoy confess already its driving me nuts i want him to hug potter!
gosh dangit plz let malfoy confess already its driving me nuts i want him to hug potter!
12/5/2010 c8 8Q3APo
um, Tom is too OOc. i think it's ok. but if he wants to get harry in any way possible shouldn't he be evil? i think he won't use simple or childish flirting like malfoy. how could dumbledore let him in if he had some bad purpose for harry. i mean he just like a stalker and dumbledore believe him just because he said he won't make harry hurt? it's unbelievable.
um, Tom is too OOc. i think it's ok. but if he wants to get harry in any way possible shouldn't he be evil? i think he won't use simple or childish flirting like malfoy. how could dumbledore let him in if he had some bad purpose for harry. i mean he just like a stalker and dumbledore believe him just because he said he won't make harry hurt? it's unbelievable.
6/2/2008 c1 mad
four words vincent drabbe gregory goyle
four words vincent drabbe gregory goyle
7/28/2006 c8 Miz
Three years...and you haven't updated this...
And it was getting interesting too...
Three years...and you haven't updated this...
And it was getting interesting too...
4/20/2006 c1 tweaty
oh fun fun
oh fun fun