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5/12/2018 c1 Edocsiru
this is beyond horrible... Are you 5 years old? It's the only explanation for such childish writing.
4/27/2018 c2 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
4/27/2018 c2 Blaze1992
Well this is different though also leaving a lot of questions.
4/26/2018 c1 qwertypous
i like thr idea of naruto being OP and immortal but wtf is.. he could have killed voldemort before he can move and yet you let him cast a fcking AK at harry? it really look ridiculous and unbelievable you know that right?
4/26/2018 c2 jablanco
That was cool
4/26/2018 c2 1TBM10
I had high hopes for this fic.. you just ruined it with the bullshit personality
4/26/2018 c2 sinedd662
naruto fuck lili make
4/26/2018 c2 Lazymanjones96
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
4/14/2018 c1 ponyheart07
Sweet story bro! Can't wait for more!
4/9/2018 c1 lawlietuzumaki81
update soon
4/8/2018 c1 cranegamer
looks good. you might want to remove one instance of naruto stating he is their next door neighbour. It's stated twice.
4/7/2018 c1 2pus in boots
good story
4/5/2018 c1 shapeshifter340
Interesting story continue it as soon as possible please
4/5/2018 c1 Guest
very nice
4/5/2018 c1 Guest
it seems familiar like have read it somewhere before
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