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5/18/2018 c1 Dethcat
“And boi was he sweating.” I can’t tell if you are being serious or not, but if you are then ‘boy’ is spelled with a ‘y’ not an ‘i’

Honestly the first half was a lot better than the second, I would say up until you brought Pyrrha in. It seemed as though your style changed. Maybe you just have a better grasp over Glynda & Jaune’s personality.

I doo find this intriguing and hope to see more, honestly I don’t think I’ve seen a “Jaune gets discovered” but instead of getting kicked out of Beacon, a professor takes him under their wing and i really look forward to where it goes.
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