for The Chime Child8/26/2018 c9 
24Steampunk Wilson
Thank for writing it :)
Oh no, she made it. Even though I know what happened, I still didn't want Bansha to end up in there!
So I figure Cadby became a lone archer until he tried to do something heroic like rescue an unjust prisoner and was shot in the process. Then he came to Bansha's home place.
But I still hate the Preeminent.
Great story :)
24Steampunk WilsonThank for writing it :)
Oh no, she made it. Even though I know what happened, I still didn't want Bansha to end up in there!
So I figure Cadby became a lone archer until he tried to do something heroic like rescue an unjust prisoner and was shot in the process. Then he came to Bansha's home place.
But I still hate the Preeminent.
Great story :)
8/7/2018 c7 Steampunk Wilson
Actualy, it depends on the dragon. Soaame may breathe ice.
Oh shit no! Stupid QotC! Help her Cadyby, before she kils again!
Actualy, it depends on the dragon. Soaame may breathe ice.
Oh shit no! Stupid QotC! Help her Cadyby, before she kils again!
8/5/2018 c7 Guest
I really like this. Keep up the good writing!
I really like this. Keep up the good writing!
5/26/2018 c6 Steampunk Wilson
DAMN! Way to move forward the plot! (not an insult, this was a great chapter)
I'm glad the pair get to move away from the haters, and I guess it'll make for some good scenes in the following chapters :)
DAMN! Way to move forward the plot! (not an insult, this was a great chapter)
I'm glad the pair get to move away from the haters, and I guess it'll make for some good scenes in the following chapters :)
5/17/2018 c5 Steampunk Wilson
Good luck with history! I study that as well :)
Great chapter, I had no idea that Cadby was the soul archer! I live these origin stories for Morro's army :)
Good luck with history! I study that as well :)
Great chapter, I had no idea that Cadby was the soul archer! I live these origin stories for Morro's army :)
4/28/2018 c4 TheQuietOne.exe
WOowowowwowow sorry I didn't read this sooner!
This is amazing. :D Keep up the good work pal.
WOowowowwowow sorry I didn't read this sooner!
This is amazing. :D Keep up the good work pal.
4/28/2018 c4 24Steampunk Wilson
Aww, friends stick up for friends. :) Yang, you bastard, he kind of deserves that curse!
Great chapter, I like how you keep the plot moving forward really well :)
24Steampunk WilsonAww, friends stick up for friends. :) Yang, you bastard, he kind of deserves that curse!
Great chapter, I like how you keep the plot moving forward really well :)
4/22/2018 c3 Steampunk Wilson
Ooh dear. They're about to learn how iron sharpens iron, I think!
Damn it Cadby, that's not very nice!
Aww thanks. It's a good pen name
Ooh dear. They're about to learn how iron sharpens iron, I think!
Damn it Cadby, that's not very nice!
Aww thanks. It's a good pen name
4/15/2018 c2 Guest
I’m so happy you’re writing about Bansha! Keep writing!
I’m so happy you’re writing about Bansha! Keep writing!
4/14/2018 c1 Doppleganger
Doo do doo do doooooooooo
Doo do doo do doooooooooo
4/14/2018 c1 Iceman
This looks good. Please continue.
This looks good. Please continue.