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5/12/2019 c22 Guest
Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
5/10/2019 c22 Fast Frank
That was intense, but lightened by Sirius being what he is.
5/10/2019 c22 2MeHoyMalloy
I did not expect this chapter to contain THAT, but I really shouldn't be surprised. Bella shifting put of pure anger to stab something to death. Classic. Also, I like that it's realistic, in that she changed back as soon as possible for her own comfort. The bath bit at the end, especially when Sirius joined, was absolutely adorable. Poor traumatized Harmione probably thought she was being attacked all over again but by human Bellatrix, which I'm assuming is probably significantly more terrifying in the state she was in. Hopefully Bella will make it up to her somehow. With the pacing of the last few episodes, this particular breakthrough seems wonderfully timed to me. Not too flashy, but certainly surprising enough to catch us off guard. As always, I hope you're doing well and I look forward to the next chapter.
5/9/2019 c22 I. Love. Books1223445
Omg this is so cute I'm gonna dieeee
Bella is the cutest! And thank you for updating!
5/9/2019 c22 2Ottoline Otter
How do your chapters just keep getting better? I look forward to your updates so much!
5/9/2019 c22 13Jaely
OMG the end of this chapter was a riot! I loved it! I really look forward to reading each update, though I will admit that I enjoy the parts that involve Bella, more than the just the other Black sisters. I think it’s because Bella’s way of thinking is so different from what I am use to reading about. In a way reading about Narcissa and Andy when not interacting with Bella is kinda like reading things you already understand is going on in the background and in my opinion slows the progression of the story slightly. I think that is like the only critique I have about the story.

I’m really impressed as to how Bella’s transition back to human was triggered. I never would have guessed it, but it was perfectly done. I’m really interested in seeing how this plays in the future building of her relationship with Hermione. As of now Hermione is afraid of her and I know that hurts Bella, I’m curious to find out if Bella will continue to try and seek out ways to be closer to Hermione? If I remember my time line right there isn’t much time left before they have to go back to Hogwarts, I’m curious if Dumbledore will bring Bella with them or not. Anyway, looking forward to reading more!
5/9/2019 c22 AquilesTC
I really love this story.
Crookshanks rocks !
5/9/2019 c22 3MistressVanilla
Love this chapter! Keep up the good work!
5/9/2019 c22 drummergirl456
Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. Hope all is going well. Loved seeing Bella have a breakthrough. Can't wait for her to try speaking to Hermione.
4/17/2019 c21 25Kigo Queen
Wow. The beans got spilled.
4/16/2019 c21 Guest
Loved this chapter! I hope that Narcissa’s relationship with Lucius improves as well as her relationship with Bellatrix.
4/15/2019 c14 6Kurojistou
AWEEE
4/15/2019 c21 1Inferius57
Oh I just love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
I'll add this to my story alerts and put it into my Zombie proof vault.

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4/14/2019 c13 Inferius57
This story is just awesome ! I totally love it, the right mixture of drama and humor.
Well done.
]-)
4/14/2019 c21 2MeHoyMalloy
Narcissa's reaction to Andy taking Bella to the vet made me cackle, so nice job. Overall a well written chapter once again. Molly better be nicer to Bella after she saved her son's life! Bella deserves some recognition for that. I've been trying to theorize what exactly is going to trigger Bella to shift back to herself, but I honestly have no idea. I'm assuming a very strong memory/connection with Andy or Narcissa. But I'm just looking forward to reading how you decide to continue the story. Hopefully that transformation will be coming soon, I wanted to read about the abs you teased way back when. :P As always, great read, and I hope you're well.
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