for As We Chase the Sun12/5/2018 c12 Edge Maverick
ja ja ja a sido un golpe genial leer como Bella tira de espaldas Narcisa de espaldas y se pone encima de ella lamiendola la cara dos veces lo que me pude reir con eso la fria estirada y horgullosa sangre pura caida en el suelo delante de todos y la reprimenda de crookshanks a Bella por gruñirle a Hermione no tiene precio este capitulo me encanto espero mas interacciones pronto de nuestros tortolitos favoritos
ja ja ja a sido un golpe genial leer como Bella tira de espaldas Narcisa de espaldas y se pone encima de ella lamiendola la cara dos veces lo que me pude reir con eso la fria estirada y horgullosa sangre pura caida en el suelo delante de todos y la reprimenda de crookshanks a Bella por gruñirle a Hermione no tiene precio este capitulo me encanto espero mas interacciones pronto de nuestros tortolitos favoritos
12/4/2018 c12 Auntie Maim
I read a lot of fanfic. I'm chronically ill, so I have the time to read a lot.
This is the best thing that I've read this past week. Plot, action, character development - all of this was on point. Thank you.
I read a lot of fanfic. I'm chronically ill, so I have the time to read a lot.
This is the best thing that I've read this past week. Plot, action, character development - all of this was on point. Thank you.
12/3/2018 c12 Guest
Yesss can’t wait for the next chapter & to see how Narcissa interacts with the order/Bellatrix
Yesss can’t wait for the next chapter & to see how Narcissa interacts with the order/Bellatrix
12/3/2018 c13 
13Jaely
Will be interesting to see how things go from here. I can’t see any one letting Bella near Hermione to let them interact at this point, so it will be quite interesting to see how you work around everyone’s protectiveness.
13JaelyWill be interesting to see how things go from here. I can’t see any one letting Bella near Hermione to let them interact at this point, so it will be quite interesting to see how you work around everyone’s protectiveness.
12/3/2018 c12 Fast Frank
Very believable chapter.
Very believable chapter.
12/3/2018 c12 21Yurihentai641
lol score for the cats! Loving this story. I'm wondering how Bellatrix will gain back her memories and in what order. I hope that the three sisters really sit down and have a heart to heart its killing that there's so much pain in their bond.
21Yurihentai641lol score for the cats! Loving this story. I'm wondering how Bellatrix will gain back her memories and in what order. I hope that the three sisters really sit down and have a heart to heart its killing that there's so much pain in their bond.
11/18/2018 c11 Guest
I really love this strory, I hope Narcissa has a bigger role in it though. She and Bellatrix seem quite close in the books, and I’d like to know more about their relationship/have her and the rest of the Malfoy on the right side.
I really love this strory, I hope Narcissa has a bigger role in it though. She and Bellatrix seem quite close in the books, and I’d like to know more about their relationship/have her and the rest of the Malfoy on the right side.
11/18/2018 c11 13Jaely
Lovely to see another update! I can only imagine being in that house would be nerve wracking for both Bella and Andromeda. We already know how Sirius feels about it. I’m really curious as to how much of Bella’s behavior, when Andromeda is away from her, is a reflection of an unconscious fear of her never coming back. Or that she wouldn’t be ‘allowed’ to see her again, though I wouldn’t think she understands it as such, nor do I think she knows why she dislikes Andy being away from her. I do love all the little psychological bits you put into this story about Bella’s psyche and how being an animagus so long has affected her mind. I really hope to read the next chapter soon! I’m looking forward to seeing her interact with Harry and Hermione again.
13JaelyLovely to see another update! I can only imagine being in that house would be nerve wracking for both Bella and Andromeda. We already know how Sirius feels about it. I’m really curious as to how much of Bella’s behavior, when Andromeda is away from her, is a reflection of an unconscious fear of her never coming back. Or that she wouldn’t be ‘allowed’ to see her again, though I wouldn’t think she understands it as such, nor do I think she knows why she dislikes Andy being away from her. I do love all the little psychological bits you put into this story about Bella’s psyche and how being an animagus so long has affected her mind. I really hope to read the next chapter soon! I’m looking forward to seeing her interact with Harry and Hermione again.
11/18/2018 c11 Fast Frank
Has anyone ever "gotten along well" with Moody?
Anyway, good story so far.
Has anyone ever "gotten along well" with Moody?
Anyway, good story so far.
11/18/2018 c7 Fast Frank
Narcissa? Percy was right, Dumbledore really is "quite mad".
Narcissa? Percy was right, Dumbledore really is "quite mad".
11/18/2018 c5 Fast Frank
Just as well, it's not as if Dumbledore is actually useful for anything.
Just as well, it's not as if Dumbledore is actually useful for anything.
11/9/2018 c10 Guest
Please update! I hope Narcissa is Im the next chapters more!
Please update! I hope Narcissa is Im the next chapters more!
10/26/2018 c10 Guest
I can’t wait for the next ôter, I hope Narcissa is in it more!
I can’t wait for the next ôter, I hope Narcissa is in it more!