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12/19/2018 c1 6Hunterkiller1888
love it also can you help me get a beta PM me if you can
7/13/2018 c2 Watcher of ways
...ok, look the story is good but the way it reads is a little blocky could you please try to make the scenes flow a little smoother by adding in transitions, please?
7/13/2018 c1 Watcher of ways
well, good setup now let's see how you pull through.
6/22/2018 c4 1the iron lion
If you can write them in decently, go for it. Otherwise you might have too many characters to keep track of.
6/21/2018 c4 5Mecharic
Nah, just throw RWBY around. There is no realistic way for them to get into the ‘wealth, or anywhere really

Dunno if I answered the ? before so doin it here.
5/23/2018 c3 Mecharic
Eh, once a month is still better than a lot of fics I read... and some I write... you're fine lol
5/23/2018 c3 11Wombag1786
Take your time, the Fic ain’t going nowhere. But in all series can’t wait for team RWBY to end up in my hometown. BOSTON STRONG for life y’all.
5/15/2018 c2 Wombag1786
Eh the story is good but slow going. Bright side at least this story takes place in my hometown.
5/10/2018 c1 1the iron lion
We need more aliens in these fallout stories
4/13/2018 c1 John Lanford
stop crossover fallout with fucking rwby
4/11/2018 c1 1B317
Yangs semblance doesn’t block pain she feels it all every little hit her aura pool is huge and she’s tough her semblance absorbs the damage without nullifying the pain
4/11/2018 c1 2welcometodalolz
I think this has some real potential, i look forward to reading more
4/10/2018 c1 13Brandon Vortex
finally fallout 4 crossover!
4/10/2018 c1 4Aeona316
To be fair, at no point are we led to believe that Yang’s semblance blocks pain.

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