for Intensity1/11 c20 Wormwood-with-Asphodel
This is one of my favorite chapters, thank you for having Snape break it down for idiots who don’t get it (me). This was a total missed opportunity in the original.
This is one of my favorite chapters, thank you for having Snape break it down for idiots who don’t get it (me). This was a total missed opportunity in the original.
12/20/2022 c66 Wormwood-with-Asphodel
This had me crying, these stories are awesome, and I’m viewing the original in a whole different light! Thank you!
This had me crying, these stories are awesome, and I’m viewing the original in a whole different light! Thank you!
8/22/2022 c59 Guest
You don't write bad stories, but I have to say, I'm honestly getting a bit tired of how nothing anyone does stops them from hitting the stations of canon one-by-one anyway.
You don't write bad stories, but I have to say, I'm honestly getting a bit tired of how nothing anyone does stops them from hitting the stations of canon one-by-one anyway.
7/21/2022 c35 sarrylover
Literally did they all forget Ron and hermione were taken and tortured last book and they were unable to help and they were useless other than being friends of Harry. But if they actually had information about who’s in the order and the plans of the said order they would be more useful to the death eaters. God these kids are stupid and cocky. They could barely take on Peter the weakest death eater yet think they could be useful to the order yeah okay.
Literally did they all forget Ron and hermione were taken and tortured last book and they were unable to help and they were useless other than being friends of Harry. But if they actually had information about who’s in the order and the plans of the said order they would be more useful to the death eaters. God these kids are stupid and cocky. They could barely take on Peter the weakest death eater yet think they could be useful to the order yeah okay.
7/21/2022 c20 sarrylover
God emo Harry. “You don’t get it” literally this story is really messed up Harry brakes over robes. Yet doesn’t do anything to get better and prepare for the war that he know he will have to be apart of while Draco is out shining him in progress.
God emo Harry. “You don’t get it” literally this story is really messed up Harry brakes over robes. Yet doesn’t do anything to get better and prepare for the war that he know he will have to be apart of while Draco is out shining him in progress.
7/20/2022 c7 sarrylover
Why does Harry have to suck so much. I really hope he get some sort of power up or something. He’s struggling to fight yet Ginny is out here knocking out death eaters god help Harry please with some training!
Why does Harry have to suck so much. I really hope he get some sort of power up or something. He’s struggling to fight yet Ginny is out here knocking out death eaters god help Harry please with some training!
6/9/2022 c66 TtotheA
Thank you! I was completely transported into this world and hated leaving it (for sleep or reviewing). It was amazing to be so immersed in this whole story. Fleur was amazing. So much more dimensional in your stories. Viktor as well. But I liked Fleur and the whole mirroring with Cho in the previous books.
My heart breaks for Ron. He should be able to also live for himself, but he becomes like Harry, putting himself aside for others. What became clear to me from your fanfic and other peoples hate for Ron, was he was allowed to be a child and a teenager. Think about himself and just think about himself. Which can be rude and an asshole, but that also means he can centre himself and actually be a child. In this one he is sweet, and supportive, but the personal cost is great.
Thank you! I was completely transported into this world and hated leaving it (for sleep or reviewing). It was amazing to be so immersed in this whole story. Fleur was amazing. So much more dimensional in your stories. Viktor as well. But I liked Fleur and the whole mirroring with Cho in the previous books.
My heart breaks for Ron. He should be able to also live for himself, but he becomes like Harry, putting himself aside for others. What became clear to me from your fanfic and other peoples hate for Ron, was he was allowed to be a child and a teenager. Think about himself and just think about himself. Which can be rude and an asshole, but that also means he can centre himself and actually be a child. In this one he is sweet, and supportive, but the personal cost is great.
5/31/2022 c20 TtotheA
I’m Sirius. I didn’t truly comprehend the robes. Thank goodness Snape had to explain the robes even more in detail. Very in depth details. Love it.
I’m Sirius. I didn’t truly comprehend the robes. Thank goodness Snape had to explain the robes even more in detail. Very in depth details. Love it.
4/27/2022 c65 Guest
Taking Harry's hand off was stupid and unnecessary.
Taking Harry's hand off was stupid and unnecessary.
4/26/2022 c63 Tomas
I love Dracos names for everyone
I love Dracos names for everyone