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1/17 c66 paleocacher18
I loved this story, well done on having a different Triwizard with a creative fight between Harry and Voldemort. The only downside is that they didn't fix Harry's hand. Dumbledore knows where Riddle manor is so he and the aurors should've raided it that night and maybe gotten valuable evidence and even found Harry's hand in order to reattach it.
1/14 c46 paleocacher18
I like your set up for this task and this story is really good, just frustrating with how stupid and stubborn Harry is, especially when it comes to Snape, I mean seriously? Gillyweed was recommended by lots of other people than Snape it should've been his first choice. I get that he wanted to do something different, but Gillyweed is guaranteed to work. Also Sectumsempra saved his life, just because its borderline dark magic doesn't make it bad. I hope he uses it on Voldemort.
12/28/2021 c66 1DJArla
Bloody loved this although the ending was sad. Can’t wait to read more of your series
12/6/2021 c66 9Em Tornado
Not gonna lie, I sat and cried. It’s so easy to forget that he’s just a kid sometimes. And reading about him losing his hand was like the final straw. Also this is so goddamn realistic like wow. Part of me is glad to see a disabled protagonist and the other part wants him to find his hand and reattach it somehow because it hurt.
Anyway, beautiful writing. Absolutely I’m love with this series
11/25/2021 c66 nire47
I have read the series to this far and have enjoyed it quite tremendously. Please keep up the work.
11/17/2021 c63 Pr0xim4
Oh my god, you genius, my heart almost gave in by the time I've finished the chapter...
I've never felt anything close to this kind of excitement ever since I read the original books for the first time around. Thank you x1000 for this experience, i adore your work!
11/7/2021 c1 Pr0xim4
Have you ever thought about applying as a movie writer / director? Seriously, the conversations are so real and hard hitting, I see the whole thing unfold and roll frame-to-frame right before my eyes.
11/6/2021 c66 hpandcarbs
I reread this entire thing in the past few days and your writing BLOWS. ME. AWAY. I absolutely adore the character development and the darker realism that your work has. I can’t wait to see how you develop this next year, especially with Fudge actually seeing sense! Thank you so much for writing this.
10/31/2021 c24 hpandcarbs
Your writing is absolutely incredible. I’m rereading this story yet again and it continues to amaze me!
10/27/2021 c1 Chemom
Thanks for sharing your stories. I just finished this one and the rest of the series leading up to it. You do a great job with storytelling and getting us to care about the characters. It shows that you put thought/planning into the work, as the storyline progresses naturally and seems to have good pacing. I like how you loosely follow the original story while also changing things up a bit and I find it interesting how you go deeper in the experience of other characters, like Ginny’s experience with the diary and Hermione’s with the time turner, etc. Will be on the lookout for updates to follow the next installment.
10/18/2021 c66 16Zeobide274
I finally caught up with this story again and I absolutely loved it. I've been recommending your stories to anyone who will listen. you definitely deserve it.
9/28/2021 c66 1Divys
Wow! It's probably the best part of this series (hard to decide:-) Especially last few chapters were very intensive and brilliant!
About Crouchs disguise - I had no idea, I thought it was someone else and you surprised me..well done! :-)
I'm so glad Cedric is alive - thank you! :-) That's my worst fear in Influence - that you become "dark" - please, don't kill too many characters, OK? :-) I know there is a war but still... it's something I don't like in Deathly Hallows by JKR...
Thanks for your stories and good luck with the next one!
9/27/2021 c66 Guest
This story is the best one of this series. Voldy managed to edge out Quirrel at badguying, there are no grossly stupid plot developments or lame gotchas and it's not needlessly padded. You markedly improved the tasks and your extra wasn't bad. You got a very cool and refreshingly unbashed Ron going. You got an actual Ginny, who's a real character that exists for real. Even your so called "Draco" (he's an original invention and we all know it) is finally revealing how he's gonna justify his existence.

I'm giving you an 9/10 for this, author. You've stopped being a rollercoaster.

(That said, I'm exhausted of reading this neverending epic. The sheer wordcount has worn me away. Reading a rewrite of the entire Harry Potter in fanfiction form is exhausting and I've never actually managed to finish any such long fanfic series. I think I'll be getting off here, author. Congrats are in order for accomplishing all this though. You are a very good fanfiction author and should keep at it.)
9/27/2021 c60 Guest
Right, there's our novelty. It's neat, author.
9/27/2021 c58 Guest
So you did bamboozle me, author. That's good. But the portkey is still the cup, which is a bit disappointing. And Harry got pulled with Cedric again too. I expected a lot more novelty than this.
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