for Intensity4/23/2023 c13 
2HetaPhiPuffPrincess
I love how Snape is so stupid in this Monet, I’ve hinted at it not subtly. Claiming to not believe I. Blood supremacy yet being faithful to the dark lord does not make one trust worthy. Sympathiic maybe but trustworthy no. Like the fact he hasn’t worked out that he needs to tell Draco the truth is literally bonkers lol like come on Snape ur supposed to be the smart one.
2HetaPhiPuffPrincessI love how Snape is so stupid in this Monet, I’ve hinted at it not subtly. Claiming to not believe I. Blood supremacy yet being faithful to the dark lord does not make one trust worthy. Sympathiic maybe but trustworthy no. Like the fact he hasn’t worked out that he needs to tell Draco the truth is literally bonkers lol like come on Snape ur supposed to be the smart one.
4/23/2023 c10 HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Epppppthis was the best chapter! I love Draco and u have made me love a version of Ron that I wish he truly was!
Epppppthis was the best chapter! I love Draco and u have made me love a version of Ron that I wish he truly was!
4/23/2023 c2 HetaPhiPuffPrincess
I just love that Draco is literally playing the fuckidy fuck fuck out of all of them right now. Cuz they don’t know he already knows the prophecy. Bruh how u put me in a chockhold and the book just started. I swear this feels exactly how I felt at the grinning of Deathly Hallows just gasping!
I just love that Draco is literally playing the fuckidy fuck fuck out of all of them right now. Cuz they don’t know he already knows the prophecy. Bruh how u put me in a chockhold and the book just started. I swear this feels exactly how I felt at the grinning of Deathly Hallows just gasping!
1/11/2023 c20 Wormwood-with-Asphodel
This is one of my favorite chapters, thank you for having Snape break it down for idiots who don’t get it (me). This was a total missed opportunity in the original.
This is one of my favorite chapters, thank you for having Snape break it down for idiots who don’t get it (me). This was a total missed opportunity in the original.
12/20/2022 c66 Wormwood-with-Asphodel
This had me crying, these stories are awesome, and I’m viewing the original in a whole different light! Thank you!
This had me crying, these stories are awesome, and I’m viewing the original in a whole different light! Thank you!
8/22/2022 c59 Guest
You don't write bad stories, but I have to say, I'm honestly getting a bit tired of how nothing anyone does stops them from hitting the stations of canon one-by-one anyway.
You don't write bad stories, but I have to say, I'm honestly getting a bit tired of how nothing anyone does stops them from hitting the stations of canon one-by-one anyway.
7/21/2022 c35 sarrylover
Literally did they all forget Ron and hermione were taken and tortured last book and they were unable to help and they were useless other than being friends of Harry. But if they actually had information about who’s in the order and the plans of the said order they would be more useful to the death eaters. God these kids are stupid and cocky. They could barely take on Peter the weakest death eater yet think they could be useful to the order yeah okay.
Literally did they all forget Ron and hermione were taken and tortured last book and they were unable to help and they were useless other than being friends of Harry. But if they actually had information about who’s in the order and the plans of the said order they would be more useful to the death eaters. God these kids are stupid and cocky. They could barely take on Peter the weakest death eater yet think they could be useful to the order yeah okay.
7/21/2022 c20 sarrylover
God emo Harry. “You don’t get it” literally this story is really messed up Harry brakes over robes. Yet doesn’t do anything to get better and prepare for the war that he know he will have to be apart of while Draco is out shining him in progress.
God emo Harry. “You don’t get it” literally this story is really messed up Harry brakes over robes. Yet doesn’t do anything to get better and prepare for the war that he know he will have to be apart of while Draco is out shining him in progress.
7/20/2022 c7 sarrylover
Why does Harry have to suck so much. I really hope he get some sort of power up or something. He’s struggling to fight yet Ginny is out here knocking out death eaters god help Harry please with some training!
Why does Harry have to suck so much. I really hope he get some sort of power up or something. He’s struggling to fight yet Ginny is out here knocking out death eaters god help Harry please with some training!
6/9/2022 c66 TtotheA
Thank you! I was completely transported into this world and hated leaving it (for sleep or reviewing). It was amazing to be so immersed in this whole story. Fleur was amazing. So much more dimensional in your stories. Viktor as well. But I liked Fleur and the whole mirroring with Cho in the previous books.
My heart breaks for Ron. He should be able to also live for himself, but he becomes like Harry, putting himself aside for others. What became clear to me from your fanfic and other peoples hate for Ron, was he was allowed to be a child and a teenager. Think about himself and just think about himself. Which can be rude and an asshole, but that also means he can centre himself and actually be a child. In this one he is sweet, and supportive, but the personal cost is great.
Thank you! I was completely transported into this world and hated leaving it (for sleep or reviewing). It was amazing to be so immersed in this whole story. Fleur was amazing. So much more dimensional in your stories. Viktor as well. But I liked Fleur and the whole mirroring with Cho in the previous books.
My heart breaks for Ron. He should be able to also live for himself, but he becomes like Harry, putting himself aside for others. What became clear to me from your fanfic and other peoples hate for Ron, was he was allowed to be a child and a teenager. Think about himself and just think about himself. Which can be rude and an asshole, but that also means he can centre himself and actually be a child. In this one he is sweet, and supportive, but the personal cost is great.
5/31/2022 c20 TtotheA
I’m Sirius. I didn’t truly comprehend the robes. Thank goodness Snape had to explain the robes even more in detail. Very in depth details. Love it.
I’m Sirius. I didn’t truly comprehend the robes. Thank goodness Snape had to explain the robes even more in detail. Very in depth details. Love it.