for Intensity4/27/2022 c65 Guest
Taking Harry's hand off was stupid and unnecessary.
Taking Harry's hand off was stupid and unnecessary.
4/26/2022 c63 Tomas
I love Dracos names for everyone
I love Dracos names for everyone
4/21/2022 c20 Tomas
I'll say this much for your story, your Voldemort/Tom Riddle is far more interesting than JKR's raving lunatic.
I'll say this much for your story, your Voldemort/Tom Riddle is far more interesting than JKR's raving lunatic.
4/20/2022 c66 Efrat Loony
As always, great story. I love how you changed it, and I love your Draco. I’m having a little hard time with Harry’s hand, but I’ll see how it’s going. Thanks for helping me pass the time of my maternity leave with something so fun and great as your writing
As always, great story. I love how you changed it, and I love your Draco. I’m having a little hard time with Harry’s hand, but I’ll see how it’s going. Thanks for helping me pass the time of my maternity leave with something so fun and great as your writing
4/14/2022 c5 Guest
You need a beta
You need a beta
4/14/2022 c1 Guest
Wait, I thought Draco had the choice to be on potter's side.
Wait, I thought Draco had the choice to be on potter's side.
3/21/2022 c62 ForgottenShadowriter
Dude, thank you so much for having Molly get up and do something. In too many fics, she's yelling at her kids to leave all the fighting to the adults, and then she ends up watching helplessly as her children, rush off to help save the day. This fic is awesome.
Dude, thank you so much for having Molly get up and do something. In too many fics, she's yelling at her kids to leave all the fighting to the adults, and then she ends up watching helplessly as her children, rush off to help save the day. This fic is awesome.
3/17/2022 c1 SanFranMom
Another great rewrite in the series showing what might have happened if Harry had responsible adults in his life, although he still has to face much peril alone or with only his fellow Gryffindors. I can't wait to read the next book!
Another great rewrite in the series showing what might have happened if Harry had responsible adults in his life, although he still has to face much peril alone or with only his fellow Gryffindors. I can't wait to read the next book!
2/10/2022 c66 xxbruhaha
You are an incredibly talented writer. You’re action sequences are very well paced and really kept me interested. Looking forward to following more of your stories. Keep up the good work!
You are an incredibly talented writer. You’re action sequences are very well paced and really kept me interested. Looking forward to following more of your stories. Keep up the good work!
1/29/2022 c24 Konoewpl
I know this series had been wrote for a long ago. But still I cannot stop myself to say that it is not make any sense at all. How could Harry put under a school that he did not attend or know, even Hogwarts needs his sign back for acceptance to confirm. Harry was Hogwarts' student! It was totally illegal or official to put Harry to other school, right? Other than this issue, I love your story, it was good and it was interesting and a lot of new ideas around it, except changing school. Thanks for your work.
I know this series had been wrote for a long ago. But still I cannot stop myself to say that it is not make any sense at all. How could Harry put under a school that he did not attend or know, even Hogwarts needs his sign back for acceptance to confirm. Harry was Hogwarts' student! It was totally illegal or official to put Harry to other school, right? Other than this issue, I love your story, it was good and it was interesting and a lot of new ideas around it, except changing school. Thanks for your work.
1/22/2022 c66 
10SilverLightning26
I've been doing nothing but reading this series (other than going to work and sometimes sleeping) for the past week. It's amazing. I love the way you've really fleshed out the characters here, even and especially Fleur and Krum and even Cedric. They don't get nearly enough credit in canon. I also love the relationship you've established between Ginny and Harry. Them bonding over shared trauma was a missed opportunity in canon and would have made their relationship a lot more believable. I also love the way you've portrayed Ron. He's always underestimated and shunted to the side and he deserves better.
I am also very glad you didn't kill Cedric (though the poor boy is severely traumatized), and the way you kept us all guessing who Crouch was impersonating. I was half-convinced it was Sirius for a while at the beginning, just because he was the Defense teacher and that's the theme that most fic writers go with when they play with canon. But it wasn't too much of a surprise that it was Pemberly-he was my second guess, once he showed up and started having a role to play.
And this is a very long review, but this series is amazing and I'm about to go stay up way too late beginning the next one. Thanks for sharing!
10SilverLightning26I've been doing nothing but reading this series (other than going to work and sometimes sleeping) for the past week. It's amazing. I love the way you've really fleshed out the characters here, even and especially Fleur and Krum and even Cedric. They don't get nearly enough credit in canon. I also love the relationship you've established between Ginny and Harry. Them bonding over shared trauma was a missed opportunity in canon and would have made their relationship a lot more believable. I also love the way you've portrayed Ron. He's always underestimated and shunted to the side and he deserves better.
I am also very glad you didn't kill Cedric (though the poor boy is severely traumatized), and the way you kept us all guessing who Crouch was impersonating. I was half-convinced it was Sirius for a while at the beginning, just because he was the Defense teacher and that's the theme that most fic writers go with when they play with canon. But it wasn't too much of a surprise that it was Pemberly-he was my second guess, once he showed up and started having a role to play.
And this is a very long review, but this series is amazing and I'm about to go stay up way too late beginning the next one. Thanks for sharing!