for Intensity8/21/2021 c66 Betty8507
Oh noooo! I LOVE this series and don’t get on AO3, not sure what that is. Your stories are worth figuring it out
Oh noooo! I LOVE this series and don’t get on AO3, not sure what that is. Your stories are worth figuring it out
8/21/2021 c66 Guest
Thank you so much for writing this! It's been a really great story and I'm so curious about the next one!
Thank you so much for writing this! It's been a really great story and I'm so curious about the next one!
8/20/2021 c66 ObviouslyRavenclaw
I didn't really review on this book before because I thought I will when I catch up with the story updates and all and so now that I am, I just want to say I love this series. Absolutely adore it. Your writing style is great, like a professional writer. It has cliffhangers which aren't absolutely torturous and aren't forced but actually engage the reader and make them wait for your updates. The plot and world building was also very interesting, like the amount of detail you went into when you told about the auror academy(a very interesting addition to the story by the way). But these weren't what I loved the most about this story. The characters and their relationships are the best thing about this. How they slowly grow over time, their relationship grows. You were absolutely perfect in writing that. Sirius and Harry's relationship, unlike many other fanfics, you nailed it. Remus' character, you portrayed him exactly as I pictured his character when I read the books. Remus and Dora...they were very adorable. And the list doesn't stop there. Draco's character, Kreacher, everyone. You wrote about them perfectly. So thanks a lot for writing and sharing this story. This was one of my all time favourite fanfiction.
I didn't really review on this book before because I thought I will when I catch up with the story updates and all and so now that I am, I just want to say I love this series. Absolutely adore it. Your writing style is great, like a professional writer. It has cliffhangers which aren't absolutely torturous and aren't forced but actually engage the reader and make them wait for your updates. The plot and world building was also very interesting, like the amount of detail you went into when you told about the auror academy(a very interesting addition to the story by the way). But these weren't what I loved the most about this story. The characters and their relationships are the best thing about this. How they slowly grow over time, their relationship grows. You were absolutely perfect in writing that. Sirius and Harry's relationship, unlike many other fanfics, you nailed it. Remus' character, you portrayed him exactly as I pictured his character when I read the books. Remus and Dora...they were very adorable. And the list doesn't stop there. Draco's character, Kreacher, everyone. You wrote about them perfectly. So thanks a lot for writing and sharing this story. This was one of my all time favourite fanfiction.
8/19/2021 c16 
1blueberry222001
Oh wow! I never knew I needed this character development for Fleur, but this is everything. I love what you've done with her! She's very creature but also extremely human, which is quite a refreshing take on her character. Thanks for this
1blueberry222001Oh wow! I never knew I needed this character development for Fleur, but this is everything. I love what you've done with her! She's very creature but also extremely human, which is quite a refreshing take on her character. Thanks for this
8/18/2021 c66 9anneomine
Why don't you post at both platforms, ao3 and ff so that every reader can read it comfortably.
Love your stories, by the way
9anneomineWhy don't you post at both platforms, ao3 and ff so that every reader can read it comfortably.
Love your stories, by the way
8/17/2021 c66 rolygarcor
kind of annoyed you wont be posting here and have moved to AO3. still a big fan of your story and plan to read it still.
kind of annoyed you wont be posting here and have moved to AO3. still a big fan of your story and plan to read it still.
8/17/2021 c66 1PokeMazter2002
hey! i have been reading your harry potter series, and i just finished intensity.. i have absolutely ABSOLUTELY loved the plot.
although i do have a sincere request.. Would it be possible to get James and Lily back again? I mean there must be some way to twist the plot and get them back in harry's life? I so want to see the Marauders back together, well maybe not Peter, God knows i hate him so much already.. but Padfoot, Prongs, Moony, and maybe (Harry's wolf's nickname) could be the four Marauders instead? Please please please i am a huge fan of ur series and i can't begin to tell you how much i have been waiting for the next chapter of influence..
1PokeMazter2002hey! i have been reading your harry potter series, and i just finished intensity.. i have absolutely ABSOLUTELY loved the plot.
although i do have a sincere request.. Would it be possible to get James and Lily back again? I mean there must be some way to twist the plot and get them back in harry's life? I so want to see the Marauders back together, well maybe not Peter, God knows i hate him so much already.. but Padfoot, Prongs, Moony, and maybe (Harry's wolf's nickname) could be the four Marauders instead? Please please please i am a huge fan of ur series and i can't begin to tell you how much i have been waiting for the next chapter of influence..
8/16/2021 c66 1thrawnca
Well! It's interesting to see which parts of canon you've kept, and which ones you've changed. Expanding out Voldemort's motivation and having him make a serious recruitment pitch was intriguing, especially the part where Harry was struggling to articulate why he was wrong.
I see that even though the Minister has been talked around, his pet toad is present and likely to cause trouble, too. No doubt it will be a bumpy ride...
1thrawncaWell! It's interesting to see which parts of canon you've kept, and which ones you've changed. Expanding out Voldemort's motivation and having him make a serious recruitment pitch was intriguing, especially the part where Harry was struggling to articulate why he was wrong.
I see that even though the Minister has been talked around, his pet toad is present and likely to cause trouble, too. No doubt it will be a bumpy ride...
8/16/2021 c66 HerFairy
I'm not logged in, but I wanted to drop a message to say I'm so delighted with your stories. I could read them again and again and again and still love them. It's beautiful pacing, beautiful development, beautiful friendships and blossoming futures. You're handling this topic with Harry so well, too (pun unintended). It's a risky thing to do, but I think given the sacrifice of Cedric or his hand, Harry would prefer this option, too. I have to admit, I'm surprised about the move to AO3 but I'm excited for it. It does mean I have no reason to check FFN anymore and that feels like the end of an era!
Honestly, I wish this was an actual book so I could have copies of it in my house.
I'm not logged in, but I wanted to drop a message to say I'm so delighted with your stories. I could read them again and again and again and still love them. It's beautiful pacing, beautiful development, beautiful friendships and blossoming futures. You're handling this topic with Harry so well, too (pun unintended). It's a risky thing to do, but I think given the sacrifice of Cedric or his hand, Harry would prefer this option, too. I have to admit, I'm surprised about the move to AO3 but I'm excited for it. It does mean I have no reason to check FFN anymore and that feels like the end of an era!
Honestly, I wish this was an actual book so I could have copies of it in my house.
8/14/2021 c66 HonksOTP
What a ride! I waited until it was completed to start this one and it went by so fast. Maybe it's extra readable due to how closely it parallels canon, but you always find good spots to embellish. Ron was really stand-out throughout this one. The dismemberment count is starting to approach star wars levels. Keep writing!
What a ride! I waited until it was completed to start this one and it went by so fast. Maybe it's extra readable due to how closely it parallels canon, but you always find good spots to embellish. Ron was really stand-out throughout this one. The dismemberment count is starting to approach star wars levels. Keep writing!
8/14/2021 c66 cahomi
Poor Harry! Rough year. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks for sharing your work, I'll be following you over to AO3. :)
Poor Harry! Rough year. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks for sharing your work, I'll be following you over to AO3. :)
8/12/2021 c9 1blueberry222001
All these baby scenes keep bringing me close to tears. I love it so much! These are all the wholesome patchwork family vibes that I need
1blueberry222001All these baby scenes keep bringing me close to tears. I love it so much! These are all the wholesome patchwork family vibes that I need
8/12/2021 c1 blueberry222001
Lol, we're just jumping right into this, aren't we? Very excited to continue reading this wonderful series :)
Lol, we're just jumping right into this, aren't we? Very excited to continue reading this wonderful series :)