for What if…?5/3/2018 c1 
2OhWavyDBZ
This is really nice! Although you should still get a beta keep writing its amazing!
2OhWavyDBZThis is really nice! Although you should still get a beta keep writing its amazing!
4/21/2018 c5 OddlyParanoid
Hah! Excellent! Great to see her pull one on her old man! That's what i was hoping for and you did not disappoint!
Hah! Excellent! Great to see her pull one on her old man! That's what i was hoping for and you did not disappoint!
4/21/2018 c5 Lyre of the Muses
This is interesting so far! I'd like to be your beta reader, but I'm afraid I don't know how to set up a profile as one without having published any stories first :/
This is interesting so far! I'd like to be your beta reader, but I'm afraid I don't know how to set up a profile as one without having published any stories first :/
4/16/2018 c3 OddlyParanoid
*Gasp* So they've been captured or worse! Some audacious actions are certainly taking place, interested in what happens next!
*Gasp* So they've been captured or worse! Some audacious actions are certainly taking place, interested in what happens next!
4/12/2018 c1 24FireAndIce123
I am curious as to what she's planning, but I do recommend getting a beta.
24FireAndIce123I am curious as to what she's planning, but I do recommend getting a beta.