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9/22/2020 c1 aheinila
Okay, first of all, I'm completely fandom-blind here. That aside, this was still super enjoyable! I'm a sucker for a dream-sequence, and you've done a great job. It started out saccharine-sweet, became utterly surreal, and by the end was just so wickedly funny.

Thank you for writing and sharing it!
5/6/2018 c1 4altaf9312
Is this joke base on Avatar Legend of Aang volume 3?
4/18/2018 c1 Guest
Please continue cross ange the Knight of Hilda
4/12/2018 c1 alexwu704
That is funny
Great humor
4/11/2018 c1 zerozx21
funny keep writing cross ange stories because I enjoy them
4/11/2018 c1 Laifongdong
Salamandinay was dreaming about Tusk? Hmm...I wonder why?

Anyway, this story's pretty good and I grinned as I read it. The only thing that would need fixing is in the second-to-last paragraph. I've noticed that you used double quotation marks in a quotation. Generally, the rule is to use single quotation marks inside double quotation marks when you have a quotation within a quotation.

So, it would be like this...

"My Ragna-'male' is exposed!"

I'm just glad that someone is giving life to the usually-dormant Cross Ange fanfiction section. So, thank you very much.

Sincerely,
Lytton

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