for The Princess and The Demon7/15/2019 c19 Guest
Please, everyone has been waiting on a new chapter forever now, please give us an indication that you are working on this.
Please, everyone has been waiting on a new chapter forever now, please give us an indication that you are working on this.
17/11/2019 c19 Best mans
Are you still writing more of the story
Are you still writing more of the story
6/9/2019 c19 Hestia is Bestia
Oh , man I dont ever want to watch someones innocence leave their bodies like that.
Oh well, c'est la vie
Anyway please keep at it, there are not that many asta x noelle stories out there, let alone good ones. This is awesome.
Oh , man I dont ever want to watch someones innocence leave their bodies like that.
Oh well, c'est la vie
Anyway please keep at it, there are not that many asta x noelle stories out there, let alone good ones. This is awesome.
6/1/2019 c19 N2
Please continue.
Please continue.
5/31/2019 c19 Guest
This really good, please make another chapter
This really good, please make another chapter
5/20/2019 c19 Guest
Please Continue
Please Continue
5/17/2019 c19 Kirito11200
Your fan fic is awesome and I still waiting for the another chapter.. Can you continue your work please I really hope if you make it long
Your fan fic is awesome and I still waiting for the another chapter.. Can you continue your work please I really hope if you make it long
5/5/2019 c17 Guest
Alright chapter 17 is giving a headache why are Asta and noelle acting so over the top lovey dovey for no goddamn reason 1. News papers most always have their news organizations name at the top of the news papers that they publish so they usually ain't hard to find 2. They already know they are located in the capital and the general area where that picture was taken giving them a good launching off point for such a search 3. And lastly In what way would acting extremely lovey dovey immediately attract the news how do they know they aren't already doing different story on the other side of the city and if the black bulls instead just asked around and found the news papers headquarters they would have a much higher chance of catching those who wrote the article!
This is not meant to be an insult just criticism and other than this i've so far enjoyed your story
Alright chapter 17 is giving a headache why are Asta and noelle acting so over the top lovey dovey for no goddamn reason 1. News papers most always have their news organizations name at the top of the news papers that they publish so they usually ain't hard to find 2. They already know they are located in the capital and the general area where that picture was taken giving them a good launching off point for such a search 3. And lastly In what way would acting extremely lovey dovey immediately attract the news how do they know they aren't already doing different story on the other side of the city and if the black bulls instead just asked around and found the news papers headquarters they would have a much higher chance of catching those who wrote the article!
This is not meant to be an insult just criticism and other than this i've so far enjoyed your story
4/27/2019 c1 Guest
Please continue your work, I've been waiting for the next chapter
Please continue your work, I've been waiting for the next chapter
4/26/2019 c17 Guest
Keep going this is very good.
Keep going this is very good.
4/25/2019 c19 Guest
This story has far surpasses the limits of greatness and proves to me there are still writers in the world not just in books but in here. Please continue your work.
This story has far surpasses the limits of greatness and proves to me there are still writers in the world not just in books but in here. Please continue your work.
4/14/2019 c1 Rexros
This is a very good story and with very few grammatical errors if next to none.
Keep up the story please
This is a very good story and with very few grammatical errors if next to none.
Keep up the story please
4/15/2019 c19 Drenix Warriorknight
1. How could Asta know what fucking is, but not that that's how babies are made?
2. I think Gordon should be one of the first squadmates to be introduced to Henry. They both just want to experience friendship.
3. This one is just random. If Luck ever stole Charmy's desert instead of Magna's by mistake, do you think could start to have a crush on Charmy? I mean cotton can conduct electricity so Luck would be at a disadvantage in a fight against Charmy.
1. How could Asta know what fucking is, but not that that's how babies are made?
2. I think Gordon should be one of the first squadmates to be introduced to Henry. They both just want to experience friendship.
3. This one is just random. If Luck ever stole Charmy's desert instead of Magna's by mistake, do you think could start to have a crush on Charmy? I mean cotton can conduct electricity so Luck would be at a disadvantage in a fight against Charmy.