for Beyond the Boundary9/17 c56 Quote
"I'm pretty sure all of Beacon has seen it by now. He just won't let it go. I feel a bit bad for Weiss, but at the same time as a younger brother myself I totally get why he's doing it. As for his new idea, I like it. A school to teach magic is something that's definitely going to be needed in the future. May as well have it bankrolled by the most profitable company on the planet. Not sure why he's so worried about people not wanting to attend though. What kid wouldn't want to go to magic school?"
"I'm pretty sure all of Beacon has seen it by now. He just won't let it go. I feel a bit bad for Weiss, but at the same time as a younger brother myself I totally get why he's doing it. As for his new idea, I like it. A school to teach magic is something that's definitely going to be needed in the future. May as well have it bankrolled by the most profitable company on the planet. Not sure why he's so worried about people not wanting to attend though. What kid wouldn't want to go to magic school?"
8/28 c3 
4The Bat Fruit
Was really enjoying this story until you included sexual assault as a joke. Rip :(
4The Bat FruitWas really enjoying this story until you included sexual assault as a joke. Rip :(
8/21 c56 Mermaid Chelsea
Is this the last chapter?
Is this the last chapter?
8/17 c56 9Scrumblenut
Aight. Now that I’m done, I’ll say it is an amazing story. I know you mention that you’d change Sulfur, but I’ll say that he still worked alright as a background to main villain that no one could really understand or pin down. It added to the magical air in the story with the characters noting something was off with him, but not being able to put their fingers on it. Also, poor Blake and her Doppelgänger, they just wanted to do things and exist. All in all, I think you did a pretty good job with meshing in magic the way you did, including how the caretakers were this background group who saved the world without anyone knowing, and even bringing it all to light and how it would go from there was done well. Yeah, there are parts that feel clunky or don’t connect well, but that happens in a lot of stories. Thanks for sharing this work. It was a blast to read. Take care and stay safe.
9ScrumblenutAight. Now that I’m done, I’ll say it is an amazing story. I know you mention that you’d change Sulfur, but I’ll say that he still worked alright as a background to main villain that no one could really understand or pin down. It added to the magical air in the story with the characters noting something was off with him, but not being able to put their fingers on it. Also, poor Blake and her Doppelgänger, they just wanted to do things and exist. All in all, I think you did a pretty good job with meshing in magic the way you did, including how the caretakers were this background group who saved the world without anyone knowing, and even bringing it all to light and how it would go from there was done well. Yeah, there are parts that feel clunky or don’t connect well, but that happens in a lot of stories. Thanks for sharing this work. It was a blast to read. Take care and stay safe.
8/17 c53 Scrumblenut
I love the idea of Beacon just being swarmed by cheeky, demonic spinning tops. It’s just hilarious. Anyway, been reading this all night due to insomnia. Should be finished and I’ll give an overall review on the final chapter.
I love the idea of Beacon just being swarmed by cheeky, demonic spinning tops. It’s just hilarious. Anyway, been reading this all night due to insomnia. Should be finished and I’ll give an overall review on the final chapter.
7/18 c56 1Lighthopperhoop
I just want to say, thank you for writing this story. It was great from beginning to end, I look forward to anything else you write.
1LighthopperhoopI just want to say, thank you for writing this story. It was great from beginning to end, I look forward to anything else you write.
10/5/2023 c18 Quest
The last chapter had a reminder of the bury arc then this OC. It the tinned peach eater or a red herring. Hoping red herring.
The last chapter had a reminder of the bury arc then this OC. It the tinned peach eater or a red herring. Hoping red herring.
9/15/2023 c46 holymalony1234
Yeah I'm gonna call its quits here. this story could have been something awesome, but the Sulphur character is utterly ridiculous, dull, boring and gives off big self-insert vibes with the whole "I'm better than all these characters" and has dragged the story down. I don't even care what he is at this point, I just want him gone, and because of him I don't have the will to finish the story. A shame, but it is what it is.
Yeah I'm gonna call its quits here. this story could have been something awesome, but the Sulphur character is utterly ridiculous, dull, boring and gives off big self-insert vibes with the whole "I'm better than all these characters" and has dragged the story down. I don't even care what he is at this point, I just want him gone, and because of him I don't have the will to finish the story. A shame, but it is what it is.
9/10/2023 c45 1xBud
Emerald is OOC based on this entire story. If this was canon Emerald, fine, but this is not the girl who said no to Cinder when she was first approached.
1xBudEmerald is OOC based on this entire story. If this was canon Emerald, fine, but this is not the girl who said no to Cinder when she was first approached.
9/9/2023 c37 xBud
Man, Sulfur really takes away from what is otherwise a masterclass story. I’ve taken to skipping any scenes he is in.
Man, Sulfur really takes away from what is otherwise a masterclass story. I’ve taken to skipping any scenes he is in.
8/3/2023 c50 TITAN URANUS
I know I'm late but why do authors insist in having the female lead raped and then immediately having her fuck the MC?
Is it some kind of cucking or rape fantasy fetish?
I know I'm late but why do authors insist in having the female lead raped and then immediately having her fuck the MC?
Is it some kind of cucking or rape fantasy fetish?
7/1/2023 c56 tH1s
After all these years, Whitley is still holding into that video. hahhaha
Talk about petty. hahah
I would totally do that.
After all these years, Whitley is still holding into that video. hahhaha
Talk about petty. hahah
I would totally do that.