for Man off the Moon4/28 c24 Hyperman15
This is still just as peak on the second read, I pray for the day a new update comes. Seriously, God bless the author.
This is still just as peak on the second read, I pray for the day a new update comes. Seriously, God bless the author.
3/31 c23 yesyesyes1212
So his projections dont disappear anymore? Thats cool but wont people easily discover about his magecraft if he forgot dispelling a sword then?
So his projections dont disappear anymore? Thats cool but wont people easily discover about his magecraft if he forgot dispelling a sword then?
3/13 c41 WynterSystems
just reread this. hope you haven't abandoned this. but it has been 5 years since a new chapter. hope is wanning.
just reread this. hope you haven't abandoned this. but it has been 5 years since a new chapter. hope is wanning.
3/13 c4 
9Archangel Change24
So this is NOT how mass effect shields work. They actually only defend from rounds fired at supersonic speeds (which basically all mass effect rounds are) that means a subsonic round would go right through. Then the armor itself would be what protects you. Same with things like a bow and arrow. The shields are on all the time. They then recharge when not in active use. This means anything under supersonic velocity gets through the shield itself but not necessarily the armor.
9Archangel Change24So this is NOT how mass effect shields work. They actually only defend from rounds fired at supersonic speeds (which basically all mass effect rounds are) that means a subsonic round would go right through. Then the armor itself would be what protects you. Same with things like a bow and arrow. The shields are on all the time. They then recharge when not in active use. This means anything under supersonic velocity gets through the shield itself but not necessarily the armor.
3/6 c16 Guest
You really do write great action scenes. I love the texture you add to them. It’s not just people fighting; it’s people overcoming one-of-a-kind narrative obstacles in creative ways. There’s a lot to be proud of here.
Very fond of how you succinctly dive into unique perspectives for the reader. This paragraph was one that stuck out to me:
“But for all of his annoyance and consternation this event had caused him, there was also a strange sense of elation. 'Mumei' was clearly not a hostile entity, for all of his mysteriousness.”
I’m sorry you’ve had such a rough go of things lately.
You really do write great action scenes. I love the texture you add to them. It’s not just people fighting; it’s people overcoming one-of-a-kind narrative obstacles in creative ways. There’s a lot to be proud of here.
Very fond of how you succinctly dive into unique perspectives for the reader. This paragraph was one that stuck out to me:
“But for all of his annoyance and consternation this event had caused him, there was also a strange sense of elation. 'Mumei' was clearly not a hostile entity, for all of his mysteriousness.”
I’m sorry you’ve had such a rough go of things lately.
1/23 c9 yesyesyes1212
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH god i haven't seen anyone portraited EMIYA as cunning as this one, eternity of experience and most authors usually forget about it and leave him a sitting duck to other's machination
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH god i haven't seen anyone portraited EMIYA as cunning as this one, eternity of experience and most authors usually forget about it and leave him a sitting duck to other's machination
1/5 c29 Stormzy
Rereading this work and actually enjoying it. Unfortunately, I also have no idea what's going on half the time and I definitely have no idea what Shirou's end goal is or why he's still alive. Yet somehow I still can understand just enough that I click next chapter...
Rereading this work and actually enjoying it. Unfortunately, I also have no idea what's going on half the time and I definitely have no idea what Shirou's end goal is or why he's still alive. Yet somehow I still can understand just enough that I click next chapter...
12/3/2024 c2 gazingvoid
ironically the more advanced the hardware and software of a computer becomes, the more streamlined and user friendly it is for the end user to use.
so. i'd imagine it's actually super easy in mass effect. with an ai that holds your hand the whole time if you need anything.
i still remember dos lol. when you had to learn command prompts to do anything on a computer. had to be a computer expert just to play a freakin video game.
ironically the more advanced the hardware and software of a computer becomes, the more streamlined and user friendly it is for the end user to use.
so. i'd imagine it's actually super easy in mass effect. with an ai that holds your hand the whole time if you need anything.
i still remember dos lol. when you had to learn command prompts to do anything on a computer. had to be a computer expert just to play a freakin video game.
10/16/2024 c41 2The Beast of Sanity
It was fun rereading this again. I check up on it every once and a while to see if its hiatus has ended. As always it’s a pleasure to join our favorite faker on his travels in the Mass Effect universe. I hope you get back around to updating this one, but I understand life has a way of changing one’s priorities. I wish you the best regardless. Thanks for a fun read.
2The Beast of SanityIt was fun rereading this again. I check up on it every once and a while to see if its hiatus has ended. As always it’s a pleasure to join our favorite faker on his travels in the Mass Effect universe. I hope you get back around to updating this one, but I understand life has a way of changing one’s priorities. I wish you the best regardless. Thanks for a fun read.
10/3/2024 c38 The One Who Reads Too Much
Gah, this ending, and Emiya's speculariom on just shutting down the relay in case of *unkown disaster* really makes me wish thisbstory was continued, even as juat a summary of how he changed the whole Reaper business, if Isadly never get to get the full details on how you portray the Protheans final end and the whole Geth situation.
Gah, this ending, and Emiya's speculariom on just shutting down the relay in case of *unkown disaster* really makes me wish thisbstory was continued, even as juat a summary of how he changed the whole Reaper business, if Isadly never get to get the full details on how you portray the Protheans final end and the whole Geth situation.
9/16/2024 c20 The One Who Reads Too Much
Weird that, in all the years of Asari interacting with Humans, they never saw Humans showing affection to their loved ones, like pets and children, through headpats. Especially with how often it's used in movies and tv shows, which would be prime research material for the Asari.
Weird that, in all the years of Asari interacting with Humans, they never saw Humans showing affection to their loved ones, like pets and children, through headpats. Especially with how often it's used in movies and tv shows, which would be prime research material for the Asari.