12/5/2021 c1 3awesomeman1990
You know, I understand how the hatred came to be for cybernetics but couldn't the stuff just be an attachment? Like, robotic armor instead of just taking an arm and replacing it with a robotic one?
You know, I understand how the hatred came to be for cybernetics but couldn't the stuff just be an attachment? Like, robotic armor instead of just taking an arm and replacing it with a robotic one?
7/25/2021 c19 Iron Man-TheArmoredAvenger
Sometimes you have to let go and embrace what you've become. -Adam Jensen
Should add some of my Mankind Divided Augs.
Sometimes you have to let go and embrace what you've become. -Adam Jensen
Should add some of my Mankind Divided Augs.
8/7/2018 c19 Zakeraz
I see, so this fic is the start of a series where each arc from the main fic is separated into individual books. Well that ought to make them much more palatable. Good thinking.
I see, so this fic is the start of a series where each arc from the main fic is separated into individual books. Well that ought to make them much more palatable. Good thinking.
8/4/2018 c2 Zakeraz
Well it’s been a while since I read the beginning of ME:HR. Ought to be good for remembering all the little details in the story. I seem to remember some hints that Hein was looking into ways to resurrect Shepard. Here’s hoping that comes into play quicker than the first version of this story. Speaking of which, what is this version exactly, a remaster, revision, or something else?
Well it’s been a while since I read the beginning of ME:HR. Ought to be good for remembering all the little details in the story. I seem to remember some hints that Hein was looking into ways to resurrect Shepard. Here’s hoping that comes into play quicker than the first version of this story. Speaking of which, what is this version exactly, a remaster, revision, or something else?
5/12/2018 c1 xvector
Ah, I'm not sure if it's a good idea to introduce Hein so early. Knowing his motivation kinda reduces his sense of mystery and untrustworthiness later on in the story.
Ah, I'm not sure if it's a good idea to introduce Hein so early. Knowing his motivation kinda reduces his sense of mystery and untrustworthiness later on in the story.
5/5/2018 c8 Alyr Lin
Ah, right. The girl in indigo is tali! Thanks for the chapter. Its great to reread this all again.
Ah, right. The girl in indigo is tali! Thanks for the chapter. Its great to reread this all again.
5/4/2018 c6 Alyr Lin
Sorry for the late and infrequent review! Love your writing still, I like the consolidated chapter, flows very well. Kinda confused at The Girl in Indigo refers to though.
Sorry for the late and infrequent review! Love your writing still, I like the consolidated chapter, flows very well. Kinda confused at The Girl in Indigo refers to though.
4/21/2018 c19 Guest
Ignus, I think chapters 16 and 17 are the same, except their names.
Pls, fix it.
Ignus, I think chapters 16 and 17 are the same, except their names.
Pls, fix it.
4/18/2018 c1 Rakizael
Separating the story into books while keeping the original? Yesssss! This will definitely make it easier to digest. This is one of my favorite ME fanfics and my favorite DE one but I haven't caught up with it in a long time. Glad to see you're still inspired and writing :D.
Separating the story into books while keeping the original? Yesssss! This will definitely make it easier to digest. This is one of my favorite ME fanfics and my favorite DE one but I haven't caught up with it in a long time. Glad to see you're still inspired and writing :D.