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4/23/2018 c2 Rock Mint Swirl
Nooo! They can't be dead! They were so young! Well, Emma was. How! Could you kill them!:( You person! Well I'll be a son of a bee sting! It's ok it makes a great story line! ~ Swirlspot
4/23/2018 c2 Rock Mint Swirl
You... You heartless fox-heart. But seriously, you do not know how badly I wish they were alive :( ~ Mintstar
4/23/2018 c2 Pokemon67
agh noooooo not my Jules and Emma...

Good chapter. I din't notice any tense issues.

I can't IMAGINE where you are going with this. If you decide to make this a horrible dream Shawn has before he ACTUALLY wakes up after the accident, I will be 100% okay with that.

update again when you can

Happy Writing! (emphasis on HAPPY)
4/21/2018 c1 44Pokemon67
agh you can't do this to them!

Hope you update again soon!

Happy Writing!
4/20/2018 c1 Rock Mint Swirl
Shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot. I hope Emma's okay. Update soon? ~ Mintstar

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