
5/1/2023 c1 Estefania
Tengo tantas dudas ja ja ja, espero la continuación y ver como llego a ser todo esto.
Tengo tantas dudas ja ja ja, espero la continuación y ver como llego a ser todo esto.
1/26/2020 c1 Estefania
Me gusta le veo gancho . La seguiré tengo curiosidad por saber cómo acabaron así. Y ver su cortejo real. Sus lemons y más.
Me gusta le veo gancho . La seguiré tengo curiosidad por saber cómo acabaron así. Y ver su cortejo real. Sus lemons y más.
1/23/2019 c1 FortressofProcrastination
The plot of this story is great and has so much potential, but the way you potrayed Kaede is a bit .. off-character? I think. But it’s a good start anyway
The plot of this story is great and has so much potential, but the way you potrayed Kaede is a bit .. off-character? I think. But it’s a good start anyway
5/26/2018 c1
4RhagesWraith
I love it I want to know how he saved her and why he's courting her. Please please please please please please please please please please please continue

I love it I want to know how he saved her and why he's courting her. Please please please please please please please please please please please continue
5/10/2018 c1 Meenathequeen
so far i love this story and it's only one chapter. curious to see how this will turn out.
so far i love this story and it's only one chapter. curious to see how this will turn out.
4/22/2018 c1 Guest
It is a cliche to make Inuyasha out as the bad guy for Kagome to end up with Sesshomaru.
Why is she holding a scythe? How did she suddenly became death or a death reaper? Why would she be so dismissive of Kaede and her companions then bond with Sesshomaru suddenly? Why would he save her? What would he suddenly like her?
This reads like a rough draft.
It is a cliche to make Inuyasha out as the bad guy for Kagome to end up with Sesshomaru.
Why is she holding a scythe? How did she suddenly became death or a death reaper? Why would she be so dismissive of Kaede and her companions then bond with Sesshomaru suddenly? Why would he save her? What would he suddenly like her?
This reads like a rough draft.
4/22/2018 c1 Q'Nisa
Even though..as you said it..."kind of rush" to me, i think its perfect..i dont know why...but i really like it when you add the way kagome react to sesshoumaru like mewling and growling...cause..i think..if they want to be mated..then, both need to know each others tendencies...and since sesshoumaru is a dog demon...he growls and purrs.
Anyway..sorry for rambling...love the story...hope you will continue more...cause..its great
Even though..as you said it..."kind of rush" to me, i think its perfect..i dont know why...but i really like it when you add the way kagome react to sesshoumaru like mewling and growling...cause..i think..if they want to be mated..then, both need to know each others tendencies...and since sesshoumaru is a dog demon...he growls and purrs.
Anyway..sorry for rambling...love the story...hope you will continue more...cause..its great