for The Pirate Prince Redux10/27/2020 c14 YukineKaze
ah fck, already tbc
i hope you still working at this, thus story really interesting. An almost huge different plot (bout Asuka's) is making this story more interesting <3
ah fck, already tbc
i hope you still working at this, thus story really interesting. An almost huge different plot (bout Asuka's) is making this story more interesting <3
10/26/2020 c6 YukineKaze
Yesssss Itachiiiiiii
oh too bad... is Danzobastard killed Shishui? cih, i really love that Uchiha dork and knowing that old fart bastard steal his eye, makes me want to give that bastard a painful death
Yesssss Itachiiiiiii
oh too bad... is Danzobastard killed Shishui? cih, i really love that Uchiha dork and knowing that old fart bastard steal his eye, makes me want to give that bastard a painful death
10/26/2020 c5 YukineKaze
i fcking know it. That magma bastard still alive and the swordsman clan is Uchiha XD, which is a very wonderful truth~! i hope Sasu-chan become Naru-chan's first crewmate! ah... maybe it's sounds little stupid, but i hope Shikamaru somehow become part of the crew too... hehehhe
i fcking know it. That magma bastard still alive and the swordsman clan is Uchiha XD, which is a very wonderful truth~! i hope Sasu-chan become Naru-chan's first crewmate! ah... maybe it's sounds little stupid, but i hope Shikamaru somehow become part of the crew too... hehehhe
10/26/2020 c4 YukineKaze
nah, i think it's fair. Naru literally declares war to WG, so yeah, that's a good price
please keep going, this fanfic is so cool in my opinion
nah, i think it's fair. Naru literally declares war to WG, so yeah, that's a good price
please keep going, this fanfic is so cool in my opinion
9/9/2020 c1 Mr.Heller
Wind is just the movement of air, air is a collection of gases, conclusion - that Gas guy from New World can kill him with one look. Ace and Magma dude can sneeze at him and he'll die, why have a devil fruit at all? They're boring to begin with, all that power on a silver platter? Lame.
Wind is just the movement of air, air is a collection of gases, conclusion - that Gas guy from New World can kill him with one look. Ace and Magma dude can sneeze at him and he'll die, why have a devil fruit at all? They're boring to begin with, all that power on a silver platter? Lame.
9/2/2020 c1 
1Yamajiji
This was a really cool start. Making Shanks his uncle was cool, and making him a wind man was pretty awesome. Can’t wait to see Naruto grown up.
1YamajijiThis was a really cool start. Making Shanks his uncle was cool, and making him a wind man was pretty awesome. Can’t wait to see Naruto grown up.
9/1/2020 c14 Invitado
Actualiza pronto por favor está muy bien la historia.
Actualiza pronto por favor está muy bien la historia.
7/30/2020 c14 Ahfucjcb
Hmmm I really enjoy this storyy only complaint is the whole Yugito thing feels like a retelling of Nami’s Story. I can’t wait for the next chapter though.
Hmmm I really enjoy this storyy only complaint is the whole Yugito thing feels like a retelling of Nami’s Story. I can’t wait for the next chapter though.
7/7/2020 c12 Rasengan
I really like it but I don't like that hatred that Naruto harbors (understandable). But that can blind you, there are also good Marines.
I really like it but I don't like that hatred that Naruto harbors (understandable). But that can blind you, there are also good Marines.
6/14/2020 c7 Theo
Me gustaría que el hijo de shanks fuera coby
Me gustaría que el hijo de shanks fuera coby